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for Shooting Star

by slashpervert

person anniea
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohh god poor harry. those two know that in order for the story to end they have to kill moldywarts right? it's all very good. i knew that draco wouldn't be able to take much more of harry being tortured. update soon *kisses*
person Leentjef
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow very ery good keep going and post soon
bye bye
person Annie
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the public fucking was hot! I wish I was one of the audience members. I really hope they won't be obvious the next time they see Voldemort. I can't bear the thought of them coming this far only to be killed.
person Annie
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally they think of a plan! I can't wait to see how it all unfolds :]
person KraeHi
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG who is it? I gotta know!!!! that is so hawt them fu*king eachother on the pitch! More please! :3
person Leentjef
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow vey very good chapter keep going and post
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
bye bye
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was sad. I almost cried when McNair was "using" Harry. I'm not really in to "pet" and "slave" Harry stories. Thanks for the story,but, I probably won't read further.
person Extraho
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh dear. i seriously hope that was a friend....
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Did you had to do this in Angst!
>_< *sob*
I like this story, I just don't like the idea of them dying = angst
person Annie
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Someone was watching! I hope it's not Lucius...