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for Shooting Star

by slashpervert

person Thumper56
schedule August 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It's hard to even read the violent and cruel parts but seeing how the characters support each other so they can survive is inspiring. Many tissues later... I wish that stuff only happened in fiction but it doesn't. Bad and terrible things happen, stories like this are wonderful because there is hope at the end of the bad. It's a message I can't hear enough. Thank you! Wishing you and yours peace, safety, and love. Going for more tissues before I start the sequel....
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Wourderful work
schedule October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awe... It turned out to be really good... I have to tell you that I had my doubts in the beginning but I stuck with it because your writing was just really good! I'm glad I stuck with it now though! You have an excellent story and I look forward to reading the sequel!
~rah~
schedule September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well written. Very sweet ending. :) Nice job.
person Jilliane
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM


I sat here and read this story all in one go. It was that good. Particularly Chapter 9, which made me pull out the tissues. Excellent story. I'm on to see about the sequel. Thanks for a terrific read.
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent story! So far the shortest of the books you've written, although it didn't feel like it. You didn't skimp on details or sex. Great balance as usual. Love you guys ^_^
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I stayed up all night reading this. I'm very glad that you wrote a sequel. I can't imagine Harry just hanging around in America with Draco while all the muggles and muggleborn wizards left in Britian are tortured and brutally murdered.

I'm interested to see if you address the wizarding world in America during the time. The books never talk about how much power Voldemort did or did not have in other countries. Did he establish puppet government leaders like he did in Britian? Or if he did not invade other countries, so to speak, then why didn't the wizarding populations of the other countries help Britian out? Of course maybe they did send Aurors to help but it just wasn't written in the book.

I like how you explained Draco's turn around in a plausible manner. I felt like Voldemort was a little too oblivious to Draco's feelings towards Harry, Draco was making it pretty obvious especially for Voldemort who is very suspicious.

Anyway - I can't wait for the sequel! Thank you for writing and sharing your work.
person Opera Princess
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"free at last, thank god almighty, they are free at last!"

How the hell is Draco (aka David) going to live without all that money???
person dysfunctionalspirit
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MY GOD.. i don;t know how you do it.. really amazing story as usual.. I usually don't read stories like this where harry loses and all is evil and dark, but i've been waiting for the sequel to a heart so ravenous and decided to give it a try.. not sure i would have had it been by anyone else.. Great JOB!!! *clicks quickly to get to the sequil*
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Suddenly a cold voice from the doorway said, "Malfoy."


Even MY heart dropped! Oh no no...I'm afraid to go to the next chapter!