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I think that's an understatement! Bad day for the Weasleys indeed! Meh, that's all right - don't really like any of them but the older ones anyhow. Your 40 miles from Clev?! Me too! Or I am when I'm not at college - just inside the pa line. that's crazy that you need to memorize those codes - unless your going for air traffic controller or something. I have to memorize the countries and capitals of Europe - oh yeah and all the flippin landforms and rivers and mountains... Yay. Hope you get a chance for a break this week, looking forward to some adrenalin (sp?) rush action between fghp!!

Bella was right though. The Weasley's are droping like flies. ~reader tries to recount who's left~ Ahem! Can someone give me a hand. Ah, yes! There's Bill, Percy, mum Weasley, and the twin terrors. Am I right? Anyway, thanks for the update. I always look forward to your story on the weekends. Until next time.

wow i love this story, hee even though i wish greyback and harry would stay together...i love this pairing. can't wait for the update :)

Wow I love this story. Great job on it! I really hope that when you finish it you do a sequel with Harry with Voldemort. Not pressuring you to though.. just strongly encouraging. ;)
Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter. =]

Hiya, I like this story very much and can't wait for your next one. You said you need a beta? I'd like to offer my help... If you exept.

I am loving where this story is going and how Harry is developing. I hope there is a sequel, i think i remember a mentioning of one, with LV/HP... maybe? well since i love your stories i would like to offer to beta them. i have previous experience and have been told that i am wierdly obsessed with grammer... if you're interested i think my e-mail is visible. happy writing!

Nummy, I like how you are continuing the storyline and adding your own little twists here and there. The twins still got the five thousand galleons just like Harry would have given them after book 4, and the group that stormed the Ministry was the same too ^.^ I liked how Harry beat Ron to death. NEver liked him, he was kind of spineless.

If you are still needing a Beta for Asylum, I'd be more than honoured to apply. Not to sound inordinatly concited or anything, but I have an excedingly large vocabulary and my grammar and literacy skills are quite high...And I like to use larger words!

Like I said, not meaning to think to highly of my self towards you. I save my narcissim for my good mates. Also, I am a Limey, so I use british slang daily, which would cause a better feel for the setting and atmosphear.

Consider me! I'm Bi-Lingual! English/French/Japanese and some Canadian and American Slang!

-Samantha, The Science and Grammar Whore!

Well first off I really enjoy this story, and I'm a little sad that it's going to be ending soon.

I'm offering to beta for your story. I don't have a whole lot of experiance - I've beta'd a few things for friends of mine - but I do have a good grasp of spelling, grammar, and tense. I am on the internet at least an hour each day except when I'm on holidays of some sort (which I would advise you about beforehand). If you want me to beta, drop me an e-mail at elliot.tedra@gmail.com. I will be away until thursday starting after tomorrow around lunchtime, but I'll be sure to check my e-mail upon my return.

Hope to see more of your stories around (I've already read your other ones - they're quite good!)

~Sae

good chapter