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Good call on the not mates thing. I'm so tired of them being mates. Sometimes werewolves just wanna have sex. Good job I can't wait for the next update. You don't see many Harry/Fenrir fics these days, or any day for that matter. It saddens me. T_T Oh well keep em comin. lol

~Briar~

I forgot this is my email keep me posted and if you need help don't hesitate to ask although I don't think you need it lol. That BrutalHonesty guy needs to STFU before I slap him upside his head. Anyway lol bye.

~Briar~

Thanks and oh my gosh you are the writer of dark gifts and beautifully deranged, I love your work its so awesome and just wow!

love F/H pairings. Like, i just love it! But, i'm with the handful of reviewers that aren't pleased with the lemon in this story thus far. Honestly, i think you're idea is amazing and completely originial as far as I've seen for this pairing- no one can take that from you! lol- but, his age and his sexual reactions are just not adding up for me... I mean, it's ultimately your story and if it works out for you it works! haha but to make it more believable his male anatomy, the sexual responses, and age all need to be in sync. Whether you achieve this by going back and making him older and more physically mature or by keeping his age and appearance the same but changing his response to this rape, is up to you. I just honestly can't believe that a virgin pre-teen boy enjoyed being raped for the first time. :S

I'm so sorry if this sounded harsh. I typically have a "if you have nothing nice to say, don't say anything!" policy when reviewing. But honestly i do like your story! haha and i'll probably still read it even if you keep it as is. But hopefully there is a chance you over looked harry's age and maturity didn't intend for that to happen. Or maybe you did ^^; But i can't wait to see what you do with this!!! Update soon :)

Oh and to the debate over pup versus cub... I'm pretty sure that baby foxes can be called cubs kits AND pups. Plus, dogs are most certainly not the only mammals to have their offspring called pups! I'm sorry, but that's a bit rediculous lol The offspring of seals, headgehogs, and sea lions-and many other animals- are called pups ahaha. And i've never heard of a baby wolf being called a cub(in fact I've never heard anyone call a baby fox a cub either lol), but I know it IS an acceptable term for them. Sorry, but my work at the Zoo has to pay of somewhere. : )

love this story update please

hoemygosh... I forth love your story tons and i totally can't wait for your next update! YAY

Nice one, I really like it. Fenrirs so... I don't know, but the way he just decided to take Harry under his wing. I'm still hoping Harry's Fenrirs mate, or at least a part of a threesome. Maybe with Sevvie, or even Voldie himself. But anyway, I can hardly wait when Fenrir figures his 'pup' is Harry Potter! And then what about Voldemort...? As I said, I can hardly wait.

And the next is to reflections of fear, wolwes have cubs! The only mammal thats infants are called pups is dog. Wolwes and foxes have cubs. Thank you.

Sorry dear, I never thought I'd say this, but this is far too squicky for me. Harry sounds way too young for my tastes and being brutalised in such a way by an unlikeable perv. Anyway, perhaps your next story will be different so I can enjoy that. Cheers.

i love the story!! the sex in the chapter is hot!! as always you write beautiful story, ur biggest fan

i love the story!! the sex in the chapter is hot!! as always you write beautiful story, ur biggest fan