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for Beautifully Deranged

by lazycrazykitten

person Sakya
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes, I forgot to say something, but going over the other reviews I remembered.

I have to agree with the fact that Harry would not enjoy being raped, but I have to add that he does have the background that would permit him to even fall in love with Fenrir as the time passes (abused as a child, no strong positive links with anybody on the outside world, a stronger person, capable of overpowering him easily 'taking care' of him, feeling defenseles... like a Stocolm Syndrome reinforced by his past).

But you don't have to use this if it's not what you had planned already. It's your fic and I enjoy being just a reader... how about an update? :)
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT SOUNDS GOOD BUT WHY NOT HAVE FENRIR TURN HARRY INTO A WEREWOLF INSTEAD?
THAT WAY IT IS MORE TRUTHFUL AND YOU CAN MAKE THEM MATES.
IT IS JUST A THOUGHT.
person sanda
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, and thats a good ideea
person Bastian
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So happy about another chapter! Aww but no lemon. Maybe the next one? Please?

I wouldn't mind a wolf Harry and a werewolf Fenrir I mean when I think of the couple I almost always think something might happen, sexually, when Fenrir is in his wolf form so if your comfortable writing it I'm comfortable reading it!
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A Yes on the Harry as a wolf and Fenrir as a werewolf!! keep up the good work
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, can't wait to see how you incorporate Voldemort into it.
person Wendy
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Getting good! I hope they get out soon!
Until next chapter
person Galaxy
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, I love this story. This is certainly different than any other Harry/Fenrir I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wicked! More please? This is a really good fic so far, you've already got me hooked!

schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
perfect writing as aways!! i will read any of ur story until i drop! godwilling, lol, what type story do u like to write? bashing or betrayed harry?