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for Beautifully Deranged

by lazycrazykitten

person elle
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
think you should get a beta. you have a bunch of past tense present tense problems.
person Extraho
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this one. Fenrir/Harry is definetly one of my favs, simply because itts so bloody unlikely- but hey? what ya got fan fiction for.

keep it up. im really curious about where this is going. is harry goig dark, merlin i hope so. should give themm all a kick in the arse!
person eldorna
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This rocks so hard! Original plot and very nice work with the timeline; it does fit in perfectly. Please continue soon.
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh~! Nice thinking on Fenrir's part! And yeaaaaaaah, if Fenrir got loose... he would sooo take on the light-side XD

And, um, Beast!Fenrir and Human!Harry is always hot ^_~
person Winter
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not surprised Harry screamed -you correct /dislocated/ limbs by pulling, not /broken/ ones.

Other than that, great story.
person anniea
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
phew me likey please update soon *kisses*
person Aalto
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! Cool, do write about animagus!Harry and werewolf!Fenrir. You write quite well but honestly yes, the latest chapter could have been a bit longer. Update soon!
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for the next chapter i luv this slash so update soon please i can't wait to see what happens when voldy turns up
person blkgrphn
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your "Harry as a wolf animagi" is a good idea, I would be interested to see how you get him to learn to be an animagi. Keep writing this fic there aren't enough Harry/Fenrir fics.
person Sakya
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, terribly short, but I liked it - I kind of agree with you not writting a scene between Harry and Fenrir as a werewolf, but I don't think he would 'spare' a lover just because they were human... but then again, that is only my opinion.

Well, anyway, I'm just writting to say I love it so far, but there is this little sadist inside me that is just waiting for when they realise that Harry is inocent. Can you imagine all the comotion that would cause? (evil smirk) All the guilt and recrimination. Yes!

Will Harry go dark? Or he will just have his own side in the war from now on? Will he forgive everybody? (please not that)

Oh, update soon, please.