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for Beautifully Deranged

by lazycrazykitten

person Bastian
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot! So happy to see an update! Great chapter I hope you update again really soon!
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, write Asylum! I love this pairing and think it's gonna get more popular. :D
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol,
Oops we just happened to leave an innocent kid with a werewolf with a taste for young boys in the place that comes closest to hell on earth for six months, no malicious intent at all nope. I don't think I have read that take on it for quite some time. So what if he happens to join his parents murderer, I wonder what Voldemort's reaction would be if he were to discover that Harry is an inadvertent horcrux while he trains Harry in the Dark Arts (that is if you decide to add book 6 and 7 revelations)...

I have always been of the opinion that age of consent should be based on the ability to understand and deal with all the ramifications of sex not an actual age. Sadly Harry's life has never been easy and has matured very early compared to the rest of his year-mates, he consciously killed a man at age eleven was both elevated and vilified in turn by public and peer alike and sent to an adult prison before his 15th birthday he is no more a child than Greyback regardless of the mans morals and even then Harry might actually be considered the more responsible of the pair.

As to the next story I definitely think both ideas are somewhat intriguing but would prefer to see the direction you will take the Asylum plot line, I am almost afraid of where you will take Sideshow.

Please keep writing,
~Reflections
person J.B.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's getting better with each chapter. I can't wait what will be next. Good work.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful ......... it's the best history that i already read harry/fenrir is my favorite pairing ...... congratulations!!!! I really liked when harry joined to voldemort, i don't liked dumbledore ..... please don't make harry to go back to "the light" ....

I vote on "Sideshow" , for what I saw is that i liked more ..... what is the pairing with harry? is fenrir too?
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love ur stories :)
next story hp ss :D
person renee
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have been following bd and really like it on your clips both of them have me intrested greatly on were they will lead
person Sakya
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh! Good one. I love it. Now they will get what is coming for them... and it only took them what? half an hour of watching somebody's elses memory before they even remembered that Harry was in prison for telling the truth?

I hope Harry becomes one of Voldemort's most favorite Death Eaters. One of the inner circle and makes Fudge regret the day he became minister. Hehehehe

Please update soon.
person Kelly
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have never been a fan of fenrir and harry. They just don't seem to click but your story interests me LCK. I love it but can you make it longer like chapter 5?
person Aranel
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have always loved the stories that have Harry sent to Azkaban but this story is so different from the others its refreshing. Great job so far. Keep at it. Oh and I like the HP/SS story better.