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for Beautifully Deranged

by lazycrazykitten

person raven
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!! I hope you update soon!!! There arnt enough harry/fenrir storys out there. But out of the few yours is the greatest!!! I hope you update really soon!!!
person kyu2002
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting turn with the story! Well written, and keeping with the storylines as much as possible with an AU-offshoot. I vote Asylum.
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now I NEED to know what is going to happen!!!
D:
person keyonnamc
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I can't wait for the next chapter to begin. Because of you I now have a new found love for Harry/Fenrir-ships. I thank you for that.

Update soon...very soon.

...(Y)
.(^_^)
person keyonnamc
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it's me again forgot to vote. I think both are equal good, just by reading the little clips you had. My vote is HP/SS.
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody hell...Lol. Between Snarry and Harry/Greyback I think I'll go nuts. This is a great start. I've seen the whole revenge thing before, but I really like it so far. The age thing doesn't bother me, like you said, it makes it more in time line with the stories. Anyways, other then it happening really fast (though, even that doesn't bother me LOL) I love it. Can't wait to read an update :)
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! A realistic DARK story. No sappy romance, no mates, no violence suddenly turns into love.

I kinda stopped reading after the smut scene, not because of the graphic details (please I've been a Japanese yaoi fan for years, once you've read tentacle sex, this is nothing), but because of how fast Harry gave into his desires... Seemed to unrealistic, but then reading the following chapter and Harry's thoughts, it makes more sense.

After all, it's what cops tell ya do, if cooperating with the bad guy will give more time or save your life then do it, after all therapy for years is cheaper than dying.

Love it.
person Sakistra
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's good. And freaky.

And please do not have Harry attack Ron.

And I vote Asylum, HP/RL. 'Cos they're cute.
person momoko
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, I vote for Sideshow
person Aoede
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about not being here for the last chapter to come out. I was in the middle of a long and boring move. Nice to come home to two chapters. So I vote for Asylum. So totally. Good chapters by the way. Keep it up.

Muse of Anon.

P.S. Keep the critics away by doing something very gross!

Love

Muse of Anon