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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, bored now, more action please. And more dialogue. And longer chapters, if you please. As you update as rarely as you do they really should be longer.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Snape, the evil git we all know and love. He got one over Sirius there, didn't he? Good for him.
And I love that Harry gave Fenrir a complete make over... but I do agree with the chest and arms shaving, no self respecting werewolf would agree with that. :)
I still don't see Harry and Fenrir together for the long run, still a short time deal it seems.
Well... let's get to the good part - THE REVENGE! Yes.
Please update soon.
And I love that Harry gave Fenrir a complete make over... but I do agree with the chest and arms shaving, no self respecting werewolf would agree with that. :)
I still don't see Harry and Fenrir together for the long run, still a short time deal it seems.
Well... let's get to the good part - THE REVENGE! Yes.
Please update soon.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, very slytherin of Harry in convincing Fenrir!
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
firtstly to BrutalHonesty- that is not brutal honesty! its a bloody flame. if you dont like the story, fuck off. - and kids having sex earlier and earlier happened in the 80's too ya know! and when they start does not really have any effect on how they react to it- people are different.
love the story so far. are the twins and sirius joining Harry? will he forgive siri? Harry really is the mature one of the two. Fenrir may be older and tougher, but harry's got the brain. thats my opinion anyway. it so sweet how fenrir is so posessive and protective of the boy, even though he does not realise it.
im number 201... damn, dont know many how got that anount of reviews. phew!
love the story so far. are the twins and sirius joining Harry? will he forgive siri? Harry really is the mature one of the two. Fenrir may be older and tougher, but harry's got the brain. thats my opinion anyway. it so sweet how fenrir is so posessive and protective of the boy, even though he does not realise it.
im number 201... damn, dont know many how got that anount of reviews. phew!
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know i was skeptical of this pairing but i have to say that it's fucking hot. please update soon
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cant wait to read more.
Love fics with F/H...
And your doing a great job with this one.
Love fics with F/H...
And your doing a great job with this one.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I missed a few chapter but it was really really fun to catch up on all the goodness. I love Fred X George...too bad J.K Rowling killed one of em >.< Bastard!
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the twins in this chapter. I can actually see them sticking up for Harry even while the rest of the world accused him of murder and sent him off to prison. Ron's being a total arse, which is completely typical. I like the interaction between Harry and Fenrir, and I like how Harry still tries to be silent, even though they're not in their cell anymore. I would like to see what it would take to make him break that silence. One question, though: will Harry be this submissive throughout the fic? I know that Fenrir's the alpha wolf and all, but Harry has always had this fire inside him. He doesn't always show it, but it's there. At least once in this story, I'd like to see him just go off, get violent (preferably against Dumbledore and/or the Order), and scare the living daylights out of people, because I know he can.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this chap, and how you added the twins. I just got done reading a fic were they turned on him in a bad way and it's nice to see the loyalty (and the smex!) ^_^ was also funny/cute parts ("but I could drown..") can't wait til the next chap.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been waiting for Harry/Fenrir fics to update! ILY! I personally think that Harry should get bitten by Fenrir and become a werewolf but thats just me. Write more soon!