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January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really great story! Just loved the change in harry =D
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is very hard to stop reading. Very good job. Though your idea for the Sideshow story sounds very good as well, it is almost a pity that the other one was liked better...they both sound like they would be an excellent read.
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December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
e-mail me an update please!oreo.fanfiction@live.com
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story!!! if there's ever a squel let me know!!!
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The first thing that comes to me after reading this wonderful fic is "why has there not more of it like that?" This is an excellent variation on the end of the fourth book. Really, very well thought out and very well turned from the start. Not to mention changing, exciting.
When members of the Order of the Phoenix began to appear I was afraid for a moment there did a turnaround and I was quickly reassured XD (very beautiful vision of the couple Fred / George, it respects so well, I can't stop smiling at the thought). With such a change of scenario, the characters are really respected figures from my point of view and it makes reading more enjoyable. Greyback is sublime, as always, and report it quickly with Harry (but also the one you describe and also deepens over other characters (his concern between Voldemort and Harry is very funny XD) really gives it its full potential.
The scene where he is in werewolf and that savior is vrament Animagus is sublime and it takes a lot of fun to read. A writing fluid, pleasant pace that all along without shortness of time. it is a fiction vrament very good, especially for this couple (I luv it)
The chapters in the prison are great and all discovery Harry made fenrir when he fails to distinguish it is really very good tour, because even if the reader knows the identity of the wolf tension and concern character works really well. It gets caught in the game without complaining.
Well, I could write for hours on the fun drive that brought me your creation. But many others have already done hehe. So I will just finished my review with one last big cheer for these beautiful chapters acknowledge the brilliance of your pen and wish you a great and good continuation in writing and hope to someday read other fics of you having such a quality ^ ^
Sincerely, Herkal.
When members of the Order of the Phoenix began to appear I was afraid for a moment there did a turnaround and I was quickly reassured XD (very beautiful vision of the couple Fred / George, it respects so well, I can't stop smiling at the thought). With such a change of scenario, the characters are really respected figures from my point of view and it makes reading more enjoyable. Greyback is sublime, as always, and report it quickly with Harry (but also the one you describe and also deepens over other characters (his concern between Voldemort and Harry is very funny XD) really gives it its full potential.
The scene where he is in werewolf and that savior is vrament Animagus is sublime and it takes a lot of fun to read. A writing fluid, pleasant pace that all along without shortness of time. it is a fiction vrament very good, especially for this couple (I luv it)
The chapters in the prison are great and all discovery Harry made fenrir when he fails to distinguish it is really very good tour, because even if the reader knows the identity of the wolf tension and concern character works really well. It gets caught in the game without complaining.
Well, I could write for hours on the fun drive that brought me your creation. But many others have already done hehe. So I will just finished my review with one last big cheer for these beautiful chapters acknowledge the brilliance of your pen and wish you a great and good continuation in writing and hope to someday read other fics of you having such a quality ^ ^
Sincerely, Herkal.
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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lazycrazykitten! I have read through yours fiks : Asylum, Beautifully Deranged, Dark Gifts , and it has very much liked me. Would like to retell to its my friends in Russia. Please, authorize for retelling in Russian. I place mine fiks at a forum SF, voices 2060. Yours faithfully ViLiSSa. My address: bolshaya@pochta.ru
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I'm in love with your writing. X)
Just one thing I noticed though... when you say something such as, "Harry hadn't scene him that way..." you have the wrong 'scene' in there. Scene is a type of picture, like a scene from a movie. The version you want, when talking about something to do with vision, is 'seen'.
Keep up the good work! XD
Just one thing I noticed though... when you say something such as, "Harry hadn't scene him that way..." you have the wrong 'scene' in there. Scene is a type of picture, like a scene from a movie. The version you want, when talking about something to do with vision, is 'seen'.
Keep up the good work! XD
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May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read this story once again, and I stil love it, and I hope you will write a sequel!!!
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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just to give you fuzzy feelings...this fic ROCKS!
can't wait for more !
can't wait for more !
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED the last line! So Tonks! Love this story and I love where you're taking it!