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for Beautifully Deranged

by lazycrazykitten

person akume
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonder if harry's going to rat out Severus? Hope he does. Anyway, thanks for the update. Luv ya!
person Join the Dark Side--We have Cookies!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! And I look forward to the ones you plan on posting after this one. Please do keep up the awesome work!
person Bastian
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you updated. I really like the fact that you seem to be keeping the characters personalities from the books as well as molding them to fit your story. The dynamics between Severus and Sirius were dead on in my opinion as well as everyone elses. But why didn't Bella get punished for 'assuming' she was going to be given the favored seat? Just seems to me like Voldie wouldn't take too kindly to that.

Neways great update and I hope you udpate again really soon I cant wait to read more.
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes, you do it's poohnation74@yaho.com.
i have read all that you have written and I like the idea that the twins go to harry!
person jenv
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful. although... can you get a bit more descriptive during sex? everyone loves a good lemon :D

i cant wait till your next update. this is a wonderful story.
person Madhater
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh love it as always, keep up the good work and and i cant wait to see the next update. ^_^
person Sue
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. Let me know when you update.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the chapter, all of ur stories are my fav!! when will u update?
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was so good, and perfect.
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nummy chapter, I personally have always hated Snape I can't wait till he's found out and killed Bwahahahaha ^.^ though it was disturbing but not unexpected to know that Snape was a stalker in his youth.