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for Beautifully Deranged

by lazycrazykitten

person rina riku
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You could always have Harry have an accident where he becomes eternally young. Or the fountain of yourth or something.
person ecila
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story, except for the pedophile thing. I don't mean harry being 14, that's okay. I mean the other references to pedophily. That's just gross. Other than that it is good.
person anniea
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving the hot kinky animal sex, it soothes the id i think. update soon*kisses*
person star101
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this chapter was great. Thanks for letting me know when the updates were in.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I look forward to the next part.
person sanda
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Bastian
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was thrilled to see you updated and I loved the new chapter. The animal sex was hot. Wow dont think I would have ever thought I would be saying that before...Anyway I was a little scared by your comment bout the story not lasting that long. I hope you dont plant to kill one of them off or ruin the relationship in the end that would just suck! Plz dont!


Update again soon!
person BullKitty
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know whether to be relieved or disappointed that you didn't go into detail about a certain phallic trait that canines have. I was kind of expecting to read about Harry's shock at having to "take the knot". *chuckles* No matter, it was still very entertaining...
person Extraho
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love how Fenrir really takes care of harry. 'cleans him like a baby'' hmmm *grinns*
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i know what you mean.
i like this chapter it rounded out the story and gave it more depth.