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for Beautifully Deranged

by lazycrazykitten

person amysds
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the notice of the update. I'll be your beta if you like. I have time, and can be prompt. Going by the requirements does that mean that Asylum will be the sequel with a hpss? I though this was going to be hplv? Or am I delusional? amysds@hotmail.com
person akume
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! Loved the whole torture scene. In fact, I loved everything from this chapter. Anyway, I can't wait for chapter 12. Until then.
person Miss Prince
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant! I love the way you used the twins! GO Neville! Too bad about Fenrir having to replace Harry, It's my favorite pairing of the year.
person poohbear74
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and the scenes were they are beating the crap out of Ronald and them is just gold
person alma
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person DHH
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just finished reading 'Dark Gifts' and wanted to know if during his captive days with the damn weasleys, did charlie rape harry?? I skimmed through most of the unpleasant part of your story, so, I'm not really sure and becuz Tom said harry DID cheat on him..I hope not and whatever else happen to harry wasn't all that nice either..Your story was almost perfect..I hate anytype of sexual violence, i.e. Rape...

Great story and please email me back to let me know your answer??
person AbnormalSanity
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! So good! I love it! Please write more when you have the time!
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope your mom is doing better.
well, i will be praying that she is well.
person Wendy
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your Mum. (If I spelt the 'name' wrong I am sorry it is just the way I am use to writing it.)
I do hope everything turns out for you okay. I do not mind waiting paitently for the next chapter so take your time and when you do update I will be there.
Until next time!
person Kris Malfoy
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope your mom get's better.