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Sooo need chapter 5! Finally someone who might know something!

Poor draco!!!! damn for him to go through what he did of course he would be messed up.i like the fact that his son scorpius is a lion and was just like harry in school rushing head first into things. anyway can't wait for the next chapter. good luck!!!!

Your story has an interesting perpective and is fun to read. The only thing is with the numerous spelling errors, I have trouble tripping over them....there is a group that offers beta services that might be willing to offer their services, you might e-mail them to see if one of thier members could beta this for you. It would make for a much better story. The address is (shadowites_daft@yahoo.co.uk), I'm positive a member would be willing to spell check this for you and maybe double check your grammar. Good luck!

i'm not a big fan of years down the road story, so i'm gonna have to skip out of this one.

Draco called Theo 'Teddy'? Pet name? He tried to stop them? If only he could have given some information! If only Harry and Draco had got there sooner. Sooo need chapter 4!

Fantastic! Sooo need chapter 3!

I would fully like to hear the whole story to this passage. It sounds rather interesting.
Scorpious in Red and Gold, huh? Hey, anything is possible...

Harry has called him *Draco before.*

When they are in the Forbidden Forest with Ron and Herm and Fang and Hagrid, Draco requests Fang, and Hagrid pairs up Fang,Harry & Draco. In the dialogue of this movie scene, Harry actually calls him *Draco* instead of Malfoy. But, he does this only once...

Continue!!! I've gotta have chapter 2! Why is it important that Pansy is with them?