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getting better with each chapter. keep going!

I like the first 3 chapters very much and am intrigued by your plot; however, I'm a little leary of beginning a story that has had only 3 chapters written in almost a year.

I like your story. It is unique and interesting. I am curious to find out what happens with the little girl- who is turning out to be a boy. Snape's admiration for Hitler is disturbing to say the least. That is the only part I do not care for. The rest of the story offers something new and different- which is almost unheard of in fanfiction.
As for the reviews- stop begging. It irritates readers. Most readers will not review- that is how it is. Yeah, it sucks, but it is true. If you are writing for reviews, do not bother. It will be a disappointment. Write because you want to.
I look forward to reading more!
Jane

This story has a lot of intrigue going for it at this point. I am looking forward to reading the next several chapters to find about this girl/vampire and the secrets that are in the mysterous box.

I've enjoyed your story so far and am looking forward to seeing where you take this.

Just read your story. It is a great beginning, but you should have faith in your beginnings and not state that it is not good. If you do not like your own work why should others!!!!!!! Be good to your self. Oh!!!! and write me another chapter please.

Ay! This is so not fair. You didn't update? And last time you did was in 2007? *pouts* Please see this and update. It's such a good story...

It seems to me that the girl is a male of the von Schwarzen Clan, half Vampire, half Wizard, which would make her an outcast? It would explain her full violet eyes that do have pupils, and her ability to use wandless Magic. Also, her being a girl that is male would also serve as an issue within such an affluent clan.

i really do wish you would update. It's such a wonderful story.

clarice.

i don't get the story line yet but your writing is very good. Pls continue