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Boy that child can sure put her parents in their place, she is going to be a force to reckon with. I am looking forward to them returning back to the hotel. I really hope that soon they can head back to Hogwarts as a family. I think Blake should realize things are not going to be better.

Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.

that was great maybe you can writ emore please??? LOL

I like it. Please update soon.

Awww that was sweet! Yeah, I suppose you could call what I did a cop out, but perhaps if you look at it from the perspective that now Ron gets to pay for his five years of infidelity and tearing his family apart, it's not so bad. I see what you mean about fixing things in yours, though. I am eager to see what you do with it, because yours is a much bigger pickle than mine is!

Loved this chapter....it was great!!! I love how you had severus and hermione react to their daughter running away, and how you had them work together to find her.

cant wait to read more!

You have officially made my day well night by writing the carosel of projects in. It is my all time favorite ride at disney, and I used to dream of a family like that when I was little and did not understand how boring that would be lol.

post more soon!! keep up the good work!

~cat

@19 Aww sad chapter, update soon

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This was a great chapter. I hope they find Caterina soon, before she gets hurt. I think it would be better for all if Blake and Hermione divorced. She seems to be in love with Severus more so. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.

I have to say, I had high expectations for this chapter, and you delivered well. I think if Hermione hadn't taken Severus' wand and petrified Blake, Severus would have surely cast Avada on him....but really, can we blame Blake? I'd be pretty pissed off if I woke up to find that my husband had spent the night in another woman's bed. And I do have to give my kudos to Blake for holding it together until the kids were asleep. He pretended for the whole day that nothing was amiss, and that would be really hard to do. Me, I would have burst in on them, acting irrationally. Anyway, I am going to cut this short, because I am now off to write the newest chappie to my story...I know that the last chapter was undoubtedly frustrating, but I hope after you read this one, you will understand that that chapter was really just a buffer chapter for this one, and, save for giving the general idea of what was going on, could probably have been left out. A little teaser for you: Hermione and Severus' romantic long weekend (so to speak---it's really wednesday, thursday and friday)is about to come to an abrupt halt.

I like it. Please update soon.