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for Custody Battle

by CryingCinderella

schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
evil thought would it be mean to kill her husband and 4 other kids so she would have only severus and there daughter to fall back as i said just evil thought.
person DB1
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@6. cool chapter. update soon

*DB*
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's awesome that she's happily married to another guy. That rules out easy endings, where Hermione and Snape get together and raise their daughter happily ever after. (Well, Ms. Figg did that, but Ms. Figg's awesome.) I also like Snape's attempts at self-punishment.
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had to smirk at that last line. In most FanFic's, Snape will always call Hermione "Miss Granger" whether she's Married or not, unless of course she's Mrs Snape....

This is getting eeeeenteresting...



person catysmom
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Barbara
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an interesting storyline. Looking forward to the meeting between Hermione and Severus. How in the world does Severus get with Hermione with a husband and 5 kids. Keep it coming.
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well not much i can say but this, i really like this story what a different way to go loking forward to next chapter
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh man .. i hope the talk turns out to be nicer .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
slaps blake for marring hermione and having four brats with her. she needs to get rid of blake and go back to severus
person DB1
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@5 awesome story but in the 4th chapter snape said that he killed albus so why is he alive now in the 5th? update soon

*DB*