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for Custody Battle

by CryingCinderella

schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is such a cute story! update soon!
person super fan
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it is pretty good but where is the custody battle? Everyone is happy and ok, and Blake is a wanker but a good hearted one, where is the conflic, the sorrow, the mess up children? I want more action here missy.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UGH get rid of Blake and let the family be together, Severus,Hermione and the kids.
person Anon
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah mione need to get rid of blake and i hope sev can spend chrismas with cat .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So cute, Severus and his daughter finally meeting. Just have to get the family back together and get Blake out of the picture.
person DB1
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@9. aww sweet chapter update soon

*DB*
person MacBeth
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cute! I wish Snape and Hermione were together though.
person DB1
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@10 cat is so cute. update soon

*DB*
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.