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Another great chapter. Although I still think Hermione should be with Severus. but this makes for a very amusing read.

Cute, Severus is surprising me with his attitude towards Blake.

Albus and Minerva made me smile.

aww that was sweet what albus and minerva did for the kids ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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LOL that is the second time today we hit the post chapter button within seconds of each other! I loved it, and I hope you like what I wrote!

You are perhaps even more evil than i am! You just gotta get Blake out of the picture somehow...well at least enough to get Severus firmly planted in...hehehe

Interesting story. I like to see Hermione in different circumstances than usually in fanfiction. I do have a problem with a constantly sobbing Hermione, and Blake made a rather sharp change from a loving husband and father to this idiot that you have now. Looking forward to reading more.

I'm enjoying the story, but I just have one complaint as far as where the plot progression is going. Caterina seems to have disowned her real father now, after 11 years, calling him Blake when she'd already asked for 2 daddies. Think of your own father, even if you found out somebody else was the sperm donor, wouldn't those years together in a parent-child relationship have made some impact? A person's family is who loves them, not whose bloods in them. She may very well want Severus to become part of her family, but not to the exclusion of it.

Anyway, I really do like the story, it's just that last little debate they had about Christmas that got a knot going in my belly. Keep it up, Cat seems like a very intriguing character.

I don`t know what to think about this story...I like Cat very much...she is very clever girl, still innocent like a child should be. On one hand I want Severus and Hermione to be together...but there are her children a nd they need a family too.... I`m very courius how you are going to find a solution in this story. :-)

aww it sooo cute make them get together lol