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for Custody Battle

by CryingCinderella

person lala_land
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person Barbara
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was hot. Severus is sure a great lover. I just hope Hermione does not regret the decision to be with him and not Blake. What is Blake going to do in the morning when he finds out. Luckly Severus can defend for himself.
person Yria
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My heart is broken...I don`t know wat to think about your story ! It is greate, of course...but I want Harmione and Severus to be together...but I don`t want Hermione`s children to loose their family. If you are going to find a solution for this...you will be marvelous writer !!!!
ps. Sorry for my english.
person DB1
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@15. lol thats so cute, update soon

*DB*
person 83Sherlock
schedule August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is too funny, and amazingly entertaining. Please continue.
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ that was awsomw i locw it and how she go sev to so to disney world with them ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story never dissapoints. i am a bit sad that i am not finding the time to sit and update my own, but it is nice to be able to read your updates when i get the chance. i plan to update soon though, so look for that!
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!! You updated!!! That made me happy! lol Even thought those chapters were kind of short i still liked it and hope that you continue writing it. Update again soon please.
person kira
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was iffy at first when I read your summery, but after reading the first couple of chapters it was kind of hard to not read the rest. I hope you continue this story to the end. Thanks for the story. Please update!!
person DB1
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@14. aww great chapter update soon

*DB*