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for Rip Van Snape

by Rumpelyssa

schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! I also hate the way Snape's death was so very anti-climactic, what with him being a hero and all. It's never mentioned about his body at the end, so he may possibly be alive and hiding somewhere. thank you for this tribute. I can't wait to see how this turns out!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes thank you! I hated the way Snape was killed off. It was pointless and stupid, and I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks so. I can't wait to see where you take this. I already like how you are portraying the children. Can't wait for more.
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes i like this very much, so far but don't understand how it can be a Hermione and Snape fic, with Hermione is married to Ron. I am looking forward how you are going to work round that, looking forward to next update.
person Regulus Arcturus Black
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Thats the only proper word I can use here. I agree (as you know) about the callous way in which Snape was dispatched. I kind of knew he wouldn't survive at the end of the book anyway, but I too was peeved at the way he was dealt with at the end. It was a cowards death, and Snape was never a coward - quite the opposite in fact. I was suprised to hear that you put Rosie Weasley into Slytherin too, but to have the new trio of friends in Slytherin rather than Gryffindor was a cool idea :D

I hope you do more chapters of this, this sounds like the kind of story I would love to hear more of. Top marks there.

R.A.B.
person Angie30
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start! I wasn't pleased how she got rid of him either, I was hoping he would live. I was shocked! I look forward to your next chapter and hope Hermione finds out what is going on.
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes, I know this is a Rip van Magic exception but I have noticed the absence of magical mortitions in the HP universe. Mind you with bodies falling through Veils, firey pyres, lord moldyshorts whisking people away and all the lovey disintigration curses that I'm sure are out there, I guess having an actual body to bury is a novelty!! That, and I'm sure after the final battle Poppy could not have checked all the non-moving persons. * gasps for breath after a horrid run-on-comma attack!*

lovey chapter, the kids ( the 11yr old ones) are great. We seem to be verging on a new trio!

thanks and I wait for the updates! ( warning howlers *will* find you if your tardy.lol!)
person Mary
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please continue.
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i agree! i couldn't believe the way he was thrown away! love the story so far, update soon!
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting twist of plot, I really enjoyed it! As you I am not satisfied with JKRs ending and I am eternily gratful for fanfiction authors who makes thing rigth:-) I loved the new trio, Albus, Scorpius and Rosie will be a collection of intelligens and cunning going down into history I think:-)
I look forward to see what you come up with as a solution for Severus awakening, just you don't dare kill him again:-) You must ofcourse also find a way to end Hermione and Rons marriage (I shudder with the thougth of that pairing, what was JKR thinking....), so she can get together with Severus:-)
Keep up the good work and update again soon!
person Carine
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,Hermione Malfoy,
I really enjoied your first chapter.So Snape came back as a sort of zombie,maybe Hermione should check in the libary for some old Vodoo-spells.
What plesed me the best,was the idea of the three kids alltogether ending up in Slytherin.Cannot wait for your next update.80)Sureves Epans