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for In the Dragons Lair

by BraziliaH

schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
extreamly hot, very kinky, its well written, but when people are talking, its a lot easier to just hit enter after each speach, watch

"but why" "because i could" "but i thought you loved me" "you thought wrong"


"but why"
"because i could"
"but i thought you loved me"
"you thought wrong"

also it gives it a sort of grace, other then that so fucking hot, can;t wait for more
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I reallyy don't understand this fic.
I mean,
Hermione's obviouslyy been kipnapped,
Not to mention brutallyy raped numerous times.
It's impossible for her to enjoy being raped.
It just is.
I'm sorryy,
This isn't a flame,
I just wanted to be honest.
Perhaps more will come out in future chapters to explain this better to me,
But right now,
I just don't get it.

Much Love...
XXX
Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man to bad draco did not hear that .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I loved u, too" What does that mean??? OMG, please update soon. Was Hermione and Draco in a relationship before? and who's the baby's father?
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story so far
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whos baby is she carrying i forgot. i loved it btw!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG You NEED to update this story I need to know the back story about Hermione and Draco and why she's in the manor in the first place. It's such a good story please continue it!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn..lol i dunno what else to say
schedule July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.