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for A Lesson Learned

by SnapesSweetheart

person MoonTart
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is hilarious.
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh way too too funny!
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! that story was sooo funny. It was Albus' book hahahahaha. i wanna know what happens when they get back to the room
person Annie
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg DUMBLEDORE! The expressions were priceless! And what is this, why are you not giving us a detailed account of this position? ;]
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually have tears in my eyes from laughing so hard. That was great. I needed a good laugh. I am so glad that Lady_Diablo is doing these challanges. I have read most of the responses and they are great, but yours is by far the best. Now if only she would send me the next chapter to Dark Endings, then that would just make my day. Keep up the great work.
Kat
person Heksy
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At the end I was laughing so loud, I almost fell out of my chair.
Thank you so very very much.
And that remark from Dumbledore at the end...
"I hope they'll return the book to me afterwards..."
Bloody hilarious.
person Vittani
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! that last line was so priceless! Oh i can just see it. Maybe they even shared a glance before falling over backards. Oh i loved it.
person pittwitch
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh Dumbledore's book? Priceless!
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are so going to get me in trouble. I'm trying to choke back laughter but it's not working. I so have to read this to my sister when she gets up. First I was laughing because I could just see Draco holding his bloody nose and still being his Malfoy self about it. Ooh, sexy. Harry's exaggerated exsperation, and Hermione's look of wonder. OMG, and then being trailed by Severus and Minerva. Oh and the look on they're faces when they heard what happened was priceless!
Oh, and the ropes? What in the world were they doing and did they record it? I'm willing to pay top dollar for the tape, dvd, moving portrait, snap shot, whatever!

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole

PS When I actually think I did a killer job on one of these challenges someone out shines me by a mile. Good job. Now I have to take care of this ghost boner...lol.
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great, funny, awesome to read, until the end!! AUGH! TOTALLY NOT WHAT I WANTED TO THINK ABOUT!! T___T