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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its an nice story so far... a little key points I'd like to make though
I'm slightly confused as to WHAT the twin's did when they ran down the path in Digon Ally and who yelled SNAPES?
Also I think maybe you should get a Beta to read your chapters and fix the spelling mistakes on them it'll be easier to read... ummm
After that I look forward to your next chapter can't wait to see how this falls into a harry/draco fic
Update SOON,
~Ero
I'm slightly confused as to WHAT the twin's did when they ran down the path in Digon Ally and who yelled SNAPES?
Also I think maybe you should get a Beta to read your chapters and fix the spelling mistakes on them it'll be easier to read... ummm
After that I look forward to your next chapter can't wait to see how this falls into a harry/draco fic
Update SOON,
~Ero
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story could you email me if you update this greata story.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I.started.to.leave.you.a.review.when.my.space.bar.decided.to.stop.working..I.was.leaving.the.message.because.I
thought.that.the.story.was.great...I.really.loved.the.ending...It.made.me.laugh.
Keep.up.the.GREAT.work.
Kat
thought.that.the.story.was.great...I.really.loved.the.ending...It.made.me.laugh.
Keep.up.the.GREAT.work.
Kat
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Harry talked it into putting him in Gryffindor and the hat knew where to put Regulus! Oh tooo funny! Sooo need chapter 8!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry is in Slytherin! Soooo need chapter 7!
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good story. I think Sirius should feel protective of Harry. Even though he doesn't know why. Deep down, he is still Sirius, Harry's Godfather.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What else did Dumbledore do? Sooo need chapter 5!
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew you were going to do that. You are just so cruel.
I almost died when I was reading this laughing my ass off. Especially after reading 'He had just returned the previous day from his annual holiday in Hawaii (Choice waves there)' and
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I almost died when I was reading this laughing my ass off. Especially after reading 'He had just returned the previous day from his annual holiday in Hawaii (Choice waves there)' and
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I DON'T like Sirius like that. He is just to mean. I think I am going to cry when he is sorted into Slythern. Don't get me wrong, I still love this story. I am just a little disappointed is all. Keep up the great work.
Kat
Kat
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July 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh way too funny! Severus with 2 children? I soooo need chapter 5!