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for I Give You a Wondrous Mirror

by Lomonaaeren

schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MAN! That was intense! My stomach's STILL doing flip flops! awesome job! Thank you!
person Amiyom
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the statues battling. Julia is fantastic!
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally catching up. Just finished chapter 35. I'll keep my guesses to myself for now, but I will say this:

I'm glad we're near the final act. Too many fanfics try to do too much or drag interminably, and I'm glad you won't be doing that. This feels like the right length.

(if I had a dollar for every time...)

Also, a small note: I think Harry and Draco were a little TOO demonstrative in this chapter. I realize they're happy and want to touch and the general newness of it all is a bit overwhelming... Still, it felt a little too much to me.

I look forward to the next chapters.
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly! Draco did it! I soooo need chapter 39!!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my...she really is quite demented, isn't she? Your description of Harry's torture had my hands covering my cheeks from invisible harm. The children faced with such danger damn near broke me. To top it all off, Draco's ancestors forged of bone and silver/platinum/iron are off to choke a witch.

I don't know if I've said this before, but you're quite the storyteller.

I find myself impatient for the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I suppose you're right on the insanity part. It IS how you define it. Part of me wants to define Andromeda as insane the other part just plain pities her.

Cool thing with the dead Malfoys. Kinda expected something like that. But yet I kinda didn't.

Can't wait for the next chapter. Really want to see Harry's expression when he sees who Draco brought with him to rescue him, Narcissa, Teddy, and the kids. Can't wait to see Draco's expression when he sees who the Maked Lady is.

Update soon please. Ja ne ^____^
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh GOD! Harry's poor face! Andromeda is crazy! And she almost hurt the kids! I like the protection Draco invoked pretty damn cool! I hope Andromeda gets whats coming to her! Very smart of Harry though...to use Tonks as a distraction and give Andromeda the guilt ride. Nice chapter!
person Amiyom
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great chapter. I love the raising of the Malfoy ancestors! What a great twist! Draco and his band of dead soldiers is quite the image! Great to see Harry holding his own, too! Can't wait for more!
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What is in the crypts? Hmm..Poor andromeda...she went crazy huh? I like it! good twist please update soon!
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! And the plot thickens! Haha! Glad Draco didn't lose his mind or anything else important in the closet...and Andromeda's a bit of bitch isn't she? Hope she gets her comeuppance before the end! Great chapter and am eagerly awaiting the next one!

Hella