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Ahh I'd fallen so far behind but I'm caught up now! That bit in the box was so powerful! I wanted to cry and scream and thrash and I dunno... just be calm all at once. It was so full of intimacy and just to see Draco's instinctual reactions, him reverting back to his fear and letting it take over... watching Harry bring him back and calm him down was so intense!

And then the last chapter in St Mungo's was a fantastic follow-up... I love Draco's reaction to it and Harry's decision. I was so happy with the way he addressed everything, from Ginny's 'insanity' to being open with everyone and refusing to let others urge him into acting a certain way. I'm so excited for both of them and I can't wait to find out more!

Ohhhh... I love Draco when he's on the hunt! I can't wait to see Harry's transition from Ginny to Draco! The connection between them now is interesting-- especially how they both just know that the connection exists. Great chapter!

Nicely Done!! I have been reading as you send me updates, but I have been rather lazy lately and remiss in reviewing,, I apologize. A very intersting read, almost like parallel universes going on at the same time, allowing them to view "the other life" in a mirror. Kudos!

Sooo need chapter 16! They're saved but what happens next?

Incredible chapter. I can't wait to see the aftermath of that!

That was a great chapter. And yes, you made me cry. (clever author) Somehow it was cathartic. This fic kind of really delves into Draco's weak spots and exposes them, lays it plain and provides no room to hide. I also think you do a very good job at telling a story of how cannon Draco may have felt. Though the box thing isn't cannon, Draco's "failures" and weaknesses and personality was and you have done an excellent job at writing a very realistic and Uber belivable fanfiction while keeping all given cannon materials. Excellent.

I have wanted to read something that contained slash and really got down into those Draco issues that you have so graciously exposed here. Reading this chapter has been like finding the hidden treasure to a treasure map that I have had in my possession and wondered about for a long time. What a discovery! I am a reader and not much of a writer. But as far as fan fiction goes, it is nice to find a fic that says those things, feelings, issues, etc...that if I could write/say I would.

Today you have been a great voice for the silent.

That is one of the sweetest fuckin' things... I love it ^_^
keep cranking out the chapters ^_^

Awww. Harry is such a badass, and he's going to protect Draco. AWWWW Great chapter!

liked the chapter. i wud recat the same way as draco, but then u said that they wudnt suffocate, so thats ok. reminds me of kill bill 2 when uma's character was in the coffin *shivers* cant wait for the next chapter :)

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