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for I Give You a Wondrous Mirror

by Lomonaaeren

schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The Weasley bint is irritating me... GO FOR IT HARRY!! SHAG DRACO'S BRAINS OUT!! YOU'LL LOVE IT, I PROMISE!!
Haha! I'm way too into this story ^_^
person Myra
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, more war and conflicts! The Salazar's Snakes circle sounds creepy D:.. I feel sorry for Harry, having to face one war after another, and not only that, apparently he's the main subject too. Well no surprises there, good thing is that now he has a Malfoy on his side. Lol. I wonder what the Salazar's Snakes will do next, and when they will choose to strike. I really can imagine how much a mess Harry's life will be in the future, with sooo many things to deal with, the upcoming war, the ever multiplying life-debts, wife issue, his family and friends, sexual frustrations and all XD.. don't worry Harry! Draco won't go anywhere, he'll stay right next to you XD Awesome chapter! Can't wait for more <3
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 22! I'm wondering if Ginny isn't the Masked Lady. She likes to keep Harry under wraps with their family.
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!! GINNY GO AWAY YOU LITTLE NAG!! DAMN!!
I love this chapter ^_^
person Myra
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. The last line was GOOD! At least Harry for one didn't exactly push that thought away.. just merely, uhm, ignoring it for awhile. And lol, I could totally imagine what Harry imagined. Being pulled by team A (Draco and the magic) and team B (Ginny and the marriage vow).. pretty funny XD. Seriously, nice way of putting the situation in a simple example. XD If I was Harry, I'd feel soo pressured by the responsibilities he had to carry. Could it be that Harry's starting to feel.. I dunno, like, suffocated around Ginny. I mean that's what he kinda felt right? But then he remembered what's the right thing to do, and also his care (w/e) for Ginny.. which made him quickly pushed it away and used an excuse such as him feeling guilty (for what he did to her) was the reason why. Oh well, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one ;D Take care dear.
person darquiel
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I likes that chapter very much.^^ More therapy sessions. I like the therapist... seems to be one of the inteligent ones! The last comperation that Harry does in the end of the chapter has me thinking... poor Harry! What can he do? On either side I person he care about, even loves, and a magical vow or curse. It seems like a remis or like the more powerful (or cunning) would win.
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person Yummy Reading
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I am so glad they are on their way to figuring out the curse. And what they apparently have figured out sounds fascinating; I mean a self-sustaining curse that is bent on either continuing the life debt cycle or bringing them together fully?! Just, wow. And the ideal of the curse and Draco partnering up is kinda cute. So are the like markings that Harry and Draco now share.

But I am glad that Draco is okay. The curse will have ample time and opportunity to put Harry or Draco's life in danger and I cringe for them. But the rescue was well written, exciting, heroic, cute, daring, romantic at least in my eyes.

Also, the idea that Harry wouldn't really recal what CPR is...wow, he is such a Wizard.

I love smart Draco, and I love absoultely love a Harry and Draco that work together!

The sleeping side by side beds topped with sharing or having randy sweet dreams rocked. Ah, dream!Harry torturing dream!Darco with such painful goodness....drool. This curse knows how to have a good time.
person The rub
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!

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person Sol
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aah, very much looking forward to a big, fat Harry versus Ginny row! And the last therapy session! Oh, please make it juicy!!
And, when will we have the dreaded Ron meeting Draco...or, as a matter of fact, Ron and Harry screaming about Draco & Ginny?
person graballz
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AUGH! Another great fic from you! I don't know if I can stand it! haha j/k Well, so at first, I didn't quite know what to make of this fic, other than it being "the fic that is getting in the way of Determined being updated"...sorry...but then I had a chunk of time and sat down to read it, and HOLY CRAP! I'm so hooked!

I LOVE the fact that Ginny is feisty and "doing all the wrong things" and I cannot WAIT until she drives Harry away! And I LOVE that Draco is trying to be patient, and that Harry has awakened him again...*squeal* I LOVE IT, I tell you!

You are a brilliant writer. You really are. Anything with your name on it has my vote, hands down!