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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I had some catching up to do, was on vacation. I love this more that ever, you write one mean story. The interactions between the characters is so intense and fun to read, I love how you write them as real people, not the flat, 2-d ones that you run across so ofter. Can't wait for the next one.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aside from Hermione's ideal that Ginny is best for Harry, she has a way of making Harry's want, need, (pick a word) his situation sound so...un...great. (the sound does't ring true cause I know how great Draco is and why, but the sounds does ring) boo.
I loved how Draco handled his curiosity and Hermione. His one ups on the girl are few and far between but when he gets 'em...
The cliff hanger was terribly dredful. Another Weasly-the last half of a whole! Actually for the whole chapter my heart was in my throat and constriction in my chest just got tighter as the chapter went along. From Hermione's office to Ron's update-a thundering heart beat and eyes glued to the screen. Proof postive of on-the-edge-of-the-seat eye popping suspense, action, and highly emotive writing, done Very well. Whoot!
A wonderful emotional rollercoaster. Wheee! Aaaah! EEEk! OOoh. Ya, got me. The spells and curses you have created here are,too, horrific but brilliant. A blood hydra. The ideal of a enchanted blood hiding in a dark corner waiting to strike looking like a static person-Creeeeeepyy. The gas, too, on a house full of children--unbelievable. Great creative thought here! :D
(Still I couldn't help but think for the briefest moment'Oo! Draco got a Gryffindor color curse with the blood red and Harry a Slytherin color curse with the yellow and green!' I will search out anything to keep Harry attached to Draco. haha. clutching at straws and planting needles.)
The Slytherin Snakes, this war, have touched the whole Wiz World in a very heavy handed way, so quickly. And to think that the crazies who support this could have been a passersby or a fellow at the bar next to you cause it's not just the "purebloods" it everyone else too. A message maybe to...I dun know pick a side? Or to run and come back when a winner has been declared and just live with the results mum lipped?
Who could the ring-lady be? Merian (sp)--it was mentioned earlier that she wouldn't be done away with so easily as prison. At the moment I think it is Umbridge. Why? Well, the attack happened so soon after the Council of War's first meet and Umbridge wasn't invited but it happened at the Ministry. Perhaps she felt slighted or outraged by their gal to meet under her nose. Umbridge would probably LOVE a second chance to persecute muggle borns and put and end to the contamination or just loard power under those not as good and prim as she. Everything in its proper place and all. She has no qualms about using dark arts. The strange way she talks and her reasons probably appeals to both muggleborns and purebloods in a mental and emotionally disturbing way. Everything is so black and white with her, so simperingly simple.
Small minds love simple. -wage another war where one side swears to wipe out the other. last one standing wins. see simple.--This was all decided over tea in a mind warping Pink setting.
IF it is not her then Cho or Pansy or if Percy has undergone a transgender operation... Maybe Pansy's the new Bella or maybe Cho went off in the head after Cedric and the Voldemort cemetary incident. Voldy was a muggleborn that was crazy, stupid, evil and who killed a blessedly sweet pureblood boy. The insane number of powerful purebloods that followed this halfblood had to be because of his taint on everything. Get rid of taint, purify with world all is well?
Why am I even trying to guess who dun it? It is maddening and creepy to try and think like a crazy war monger-person. But your chapter has me all in a tizzy and I want to work off this fabulous heart thumping energy. (no, it wasn't coffee, though it might have been cake)
Yes, Harry's mind is preoccupied from his potential bi-sexual mid-life crisis. The urgency to discover his mysterious desire Pales in comparison to the very present maddness of a new War. (I don't really care what he discovers I just thought it would be fun to see him put forth a Gryfindor but purely Harry effort. Just the idea of the stubborn effort renders chuckles.)
!Ah! From the way this is going so far, it may be a good idea for Draco to...move...on. ::sobgaspsob:: Not that I want him to cause H/D ForeveR! But I don't want Draco to be crushed. Maybe he should just give Harry his heart like literally. Ya, know in a little box like that pirate chest thing in that movie. This way Harry can always have Draco near, the life debt should be satisfied by that --the wanker, and Draco won't have to bare the everlasting ache of such a great and beautiful unrequited love, being firmly unwanted. It's too much. Draco could just move on indifferent (but alive of course--magic miracles and all)and "move on". Sounds like a plan. Ee-gads, I'm being maudlin and morbid. Don't mind me. It's the rainy weather.
And not that I need to comment on it, but...is James feeling bereft of his father, Harry, and is just taking it out on his father-look alike - brother, Albus. But Albus is soooooooo cute even with soppy cerel and milk dripping down his face.
I loved this chapter as I do the entire fic. A fine masterpeice. It is fun watching art in action so very much alive.
I loved how Draco handled his curiosity and Hermione. His one ups on the girl are few and far between but when he gets 'em...
The cliff hanger was terribly dredful. Another Weasly-the last half of a whole! Actually for the whole chapter my heart was in my throat and constriction in my chest just got tighter as the chapter went along. From Hermione's office to Ron's update-a thundering heart beat and eyes glued to the screen. Proof postive of on-the-edge-of-the-seat eye popping suspense, action, and highly emotive writing, done Very well. Whoot!
A wonderful emotional rollercoaster. Wheee! Aaaah! EEEk! OOoh. Ya, got me. The spells and curses you have created here are,too, horrific but brilliant. A blood hydra. The ideal of a enchanted blood hiding in a dark corner waiting to strike looking like a static person-Creeeeeepyy. The gas, too, on a house full of children--unbelievable. Great creative thought here! :D
(Still I couldn't help but think for the briefest moment'Oo! Draco got a Gryffindor color curse with the blood red and Harry a Slytherin color curse with the yellow and green!' I will search out anything to keep Harry attached to Draco. haha. clutching at straws and planting needles.)
The Slytherin Snakes, this war, have touched the whole Wiz World in a very heavy handed way, so quickly. And to think that the crazies who support this could have been a passersby or a fellow at the bar next to you cause it's not just the "purebloods" it everyone else too. A message maybe to...I dun know pick a side? Or to run and come back when a winner has been declared and just live with the results mum lipped?
Who could the ring-lady be? Merian (sp)--it was mentioned earlier that she wouldn't be done away with so easily as prison. At the moment I think it is Umbridge. Why? Well, the attack happened so soon after the Council of War's first meet and Umbridge wasn't invited but it happened at the Ministry. Perhaps she felt slighted or outraged by their gal to meet under her nose. Umbridge would probably LOVE a second chance to persecute muggle borns and put and end to the contamination or just loard power under those not as good and prim as she. Everything in its proper place and all. She has no qualms about using dark arts. The strange way she talks and her reasons probably appeals to both muggleborns and purebloods in a mental and emotionally disturbing way. Everything is so black and white with her, so simperingly simple.
Small minds love simple. -wage another war where one side swears to wipe out the other. last one standing wins. see simple.--This was all decided over tea in a mind warping Pink setting.
IF it is not her then Cho or Pansy or if Percy has undergone a transgender operation... Maybe Pansy's the new Bella or maybe Cho went off in the head after Cedric and the Voldemort cemetary incident. Voldy was a muggleborn that was crazy, stupid, evil and who killed a blessedly sweet pureblood boy. The insane number of powerful purebloods that followed this halfblood had to be because of his taint on everything. Get rid of taint, purify with world all is well?
Why am I even trying to guess who dun it? It is maddening and creepy to try and think like a crazy war monger-person. But your chapter has me all in a tizzy and I want to work off this fabulous heart thumping energy. (no, it wasn't coffee, though it might have been cake)
Yes, Harry's mind is preoccupied from his potential bi-sexual mid-life crisis. The urgency to discover his mysterious desire Pales in comparison to the very present maddness of a new War. (I don't really care what he discovers I just thought it would be fun to see him put forth a Gryfindor but purely Harry effort. Just the idea of the stubborn effort renders chuckles.)
!Ah! From the way this is going so far, it may be a good idea for Draco to...move...on. ::sobgaspsob:: Not that I want him to cause H/D ForeveR! But I don't want Draco to be crushed. Maybe he should just give Harry his heart like literally. Ya, know in a little box like that pirate chest thing in that movie. This way Harry can always have Draco near, the life debt should be satisfied by that --the wanker, and Draco won't have to bare the everlasting ache of such a great and beautiful unrequited love, being firmly unwanted. It's too much. Draco could just move on indifferent (but alive of course--magic miracles and all)and "move on". Sounds like a plan. Ee-gads, I'm being maudlin and morbid. Don't mind me. It's the rainy weather.
And not that I need to comment on it, but...is James feeling bereft of his father, Harry, and is just taking it out on his father-look alike - brother, Albus. But Albus is soooooooo cute even with soppy cerel and milk dripping down his face.
I loved this chapter as I do the entire fic. A fine masterpeice. It is fun watching art in action so very much alive.
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Arg... this two chapters were great!! They attacted the childern... bad, very bad. I see lots of pain coming their way. I'm very interessted in what you said in the answer to Rafiq's review. Something that is hard to forgive... hhmmmm.... You really want us curious here. *smile* But the connection are get tighter around Harry and Draco and I'm looking forward to see what you have planned for that 24th chap you mentioned.
Will there be another session with the cool head-doc?? I like him, and I want to know what he thinks about Harry... and
'Till now all major reinforcements of the bound between Harry and Draco happend when they were alone or unobserved. Will there be a situation where maybe Ron, Hermine or Ginny will be present??
Hope you update soon!!!
greetings
Will there be another session with the cool head-doc?? I like him, and I want to know what he thinks about Harry... and
'Till now all major reinforcements of the bound between Harry and Draco happend when they were alone or unobserved. Will there be a situation where maybe Ron, Hermine or Ginny will be present??
Hope you update soon!!!
greetings
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September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Marion
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How does the bonds with Draco affect his marriage vows? Sooo need chapter 23!
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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. That was an INTENSE chapter! Fantastic job. The emotion and action alike were superb-- can't wait to see more!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, quite the chapter. Draco has certainly gotten ahead of Ginny. I loved the moment when Draco started to caress Harry under the table and he thought "He's mine" Awwww so sweet.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the snowy owl! I hope Draco does get Harry one.
Yes, Harry is a sucker for Ginny's tears. I agree. I don't think that will change until he really know what he wants and has made a real decision either way. Ah, well everyone has their weak spots. I wonder what Draco's is concerning Harry.
Draco is brillinat. All that touching and closeness. Oh, if Harry would take Draco up on the offer for protection. What old man condition does Ginny think Harry has again? Can't control his arousal -condiiton? Well, the poor fella was easily aroused in this chapter which was very entertaining but they were all for Draco. Will we see a test of other guys to appease the Doctor's mind?
I look forward to Harry making the first move. It would say so much more when it came from him. And this surprsied me:
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Yes, Harry is a sucker for Ginny's tears. I agree. I don't think that will change until he really know what he wants and has made a real decision either way. Ah, well everyone has their weak spots. I wonder what Draco's is concerning Harry.
Draco is brillinat. All that touching and closeness. Oh, if Harry would take Draco up on the offer for protection. What old man condition does Ginny think Harry has again? Can't control his arousal -condiiton? Well, the poor fella was easily aroused in this chapter which was very entertaining but they were all for Draco. Will we see a test of other guys to appease the Doctor's mind?
I look forward to Harry making the first move. It would say so much more when it came from him. And this surprsied me:
"It
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Much as I want to see Harry and Draco finally get together, I'm starting to feel sorry for Ginny. But maybe Ginny will do something to change that.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this image of Draco as a "body"guard to Harry. I love it. Harry needs to give into his sexual frustration more often.
Ok, so he wouldn't just do that, but I can still dream.
Honestly, your plot just gets more and more exciting with every passing moment! The accumulating life-debts and the war that lingers on the horizon! And this Masked Lady! Oh I have so many theories about her but... I just don't know for sure! Which, of course, is a good thing. More surprising when it happens then teehee 8D I cannot wait for more! I so want to know what happens to Ginny if Harry and Draco need to give themselves each other to satisfy the life-debt.
And I REALLY REALLY hope that Draco gets Harry a snowy owl! Just like in the "other world" that pulled them! Oooh it's so lovely! XD
Ok, so he wouldn't just do that, but I can still dream.
Honestly, your plot just gets more and more exciting with every passing moment! The accumulating life-debts and the war that lingers on the horizon! And this Masked Lady! Oh I have so many theories about her but... I just don't know for sure! Which, of course, is a good thing. More surprising when it happens then teehee 8D I cannot wait for more! I so want to know what happens to Ginny if Harry and Draco need to give themselves each other to satisfy the life-debt.
And I REALLY REALLY hope that Draco gets Harry a snowy owl! Just like in the "other world" that pulled them! Oooh it's so lovely! XD