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for I Give You a Wondrous Mirror

by Lomonaaeren

person kalaway
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really wonderful. I read all 31 chapters in about 3 days. The characterizations are excellent. I don't know if I understand the whole war, purebloods and mudbloods working together so that they cna fight?? but I look forward to seeing how you bring it all together. Beautiful :D
person Myra
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thaankies for the update! I was excited when I saw a new chapter, hehe. Anyways, I'm not surprised when James asked about Ginny. And it was hard for Harry, but yeah, we were all sure it was coming. Draco handled James very well, he was soo good! James, Scorpies, Al, Lily and Rose were all so very cute! Hehe, I love it when they're in the chapters.

Yay. So happy and glad that Hermione came to Harry. And I don't have to say this again but I will anyway. I love Ron, so reasonable. Hehe. Great chapter!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
James' response? Annoying and appropriate. I almost felt like killing myself with a spoon in frustration. Hermione's apology? I'm neut on her right now. Narcissa and Rose? Adorable. ^^
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 32! I wouldn't trust anything written by Ginny!
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 17. I am really enjoying this story. You are drawing things out, switching viewpoints at just the right moment, and keeping things in character as best as I can tell. Admittedly I don't think Harry would be quite this mature, but then, as I know, having a kid does change your outlook. I think you captured draco very well also, even better than Harry.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how you dovetail this with canon at the end.
person JMB
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter and Draco and Harry did a perfect job tag-teaming James on parenting. Please continue soon! Also, when I think of Rose going home and spouting off how wonderful Malfoy Manor is, I think Ron's head just might explode from anger.
person Sol
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank-you for the glorious sex! Speechless, I smile and slowly lick the cream away from my whiskers! Satisfied, I'm ready to face the next day...
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't read really any HD, but I'm glad I grabbed this one. I've only finished the first chapter but I'm already captivated and am looking forward to what happens next.
person Myra
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddddd! That was so sexy! Wow! I know they did that in their dream world, but it was soooooo real. Maybe half of it was real >:0 (I sure do hope so) haha. Seriously, Harry was so hot dominating Draco! I was practically holding my breath. I loved the fact that they both completely trusted each other in everything. Awesome chapter (an understatement!) Lol. Can't wait for the next one!
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 31! At least they have their dreams!