AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for I Give You a Wondrous Mirror

by Lomonaaeren

schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks like you've found a way to break the vows, doesn't it?

Good stuff this chapter. I'm going to sit on my guesses as to the masked lady, except to say I'm pretty sure it's someone we know who has appeared in this story.

I look forward to finding out who it is, and also, as I've said, how the story reconciles with the epilogue. For me, I think that will be the true climax.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was without a doubt one of the most evil cliffhangers I've ever read.

I really like the story, especially right now as I'm drowning in angst in a situation similar to pre-poisoning Harry and Ginny (minus the man-love...:).

I look forward to the next chapter, whenever it may arrive. Which is hopefully very soon.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. My reaction to the dueling marriage vows and life debts: "...oh (bleep)." This going to get a whole lot worse before it gets better, isn't it?

I'm gonna need more fire wood.
schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 33!
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG no!!!!!!!!! i hope andromeda and teddy escaped!!
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooo, not teddy n dromeda! hey, she couldnt confirm they were dead, so theres still hope. as soon as i saw hermione fire-calling, i knew another one of your maddening yet brilliant cliffhangers was on the way. this is probably one of your top 3 cliffies cant wait for next chappie :)
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bur...? Wha...? How...?

Ohh, you're evil. ^^

Nice touch with Narcissa, by the way. And I hope Ginny doesn't do anything ridiculously stupid....

I think I'll camp out here until your next update. *pulls out sleeping bag* ^^
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL?! I can't believe she attacked the Tonks house. I hope Teddy is alright. And Andromeda too. But mostly Teddy because I think he is so sweet and I sometimes think that Andromeda would be better off with her daughter and husband and son-in-law. She seems so sad without them. Please make Teddy still alive. I couldn't bear it if he died and neither could Harry. Hope you update soon. Ja ne ^____^
person Myra
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I won't blame Ginny for that letter. It's actually good that she now believed that it wasn't only Harry's fault but hers, too. But anyways, thank god Draco was there to make Harry understand his own happiness. And Narcissa was pleasant, such a motherly figure.

And (wide eyes) what happened to Teddy and Andromeda? I hopeeeeeeeeeee they're fine! So worried. Gaaaah. I don't want them dead T__T. Great chapter as usual. Can't wait for the next one!
person Amiyom
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG...

*Speechless*