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for A Reckless Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty interesting. I hope Draco can help Harry, and get rid of the curse. I wonder who could hate Harry that much, to put a curse like that on him?
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is still really good. I just wish Draco would just get to the true bottom of this and help Harry. I still want to know who the caster is. Keep up the great work.
Kat
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so wonderful and i enjoyed it so much keep up the great work!!
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this is soooo good! Now we're getting to the 'meat' so to speak...Draco is tenacious enough to seek out the truth... and not give up while trying! I love that aspect of his personality and the fact that he never has seen Harry as anything special. Keep writing, this is fabulous! KLS :-)
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better. I am sooo hooked. I can't wait for more.
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How much longer can Draco take all the mixed emotions that he is reading in Harry before he goes nuts??? Is the caster of the curse Draco??? That is the only person I can think of off the top of my head, unless you really twist this fic and make it one of Harry's supposed friends. That would be great, but I know you already have it planned so the you know who the caster is. Why won't you give us any clues as to who cast it??? I can't wait until your next update. Keep up the great work.
Kat
person Liz
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright. You've got me hooked already. Haha, I haven't read any fanfiction in a looooong time and I have to say I'm very glad I came across this one =) The way you write is just so... believable I suppose, and it's really refreshing... 'Cause I've also come across alot of crap lately too, lol. How you came up with this whole idea I have no idea, but as I said... you've got me hooked =)

Am looking forward to more!!
~Liz
person whiterage
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg! ANOTHER update! lol, it made me so happy T_T haha ugh yeah my last review was my second attempt and it still got botched. Not sure what I said but... pretty sure I said something like how much I loved the way you described things from both Draco and Harry's POV. It was really sweet and made me feel so sympathetic towards Harry. You have a really wonderful way of expressing things. The next chapter, all the things about the wards didn't really catch my attention but I still enjoyed the chapter very much! I liked how, unlike some authors, you go into detail about things that could've been explained in like a paragraph (I think it shows how much effort you put into your work and it shows ^^) I somewhat got confused before though, thinking that if Draco concluded that Harry believed himself under the curse, wouldn't Harry technically tell the truth thinking he was incapable of saying lies? But I think this chapter, or maybe 10 mins of thinking, helped me realize that it was probably Harry thinking whatever he said was truth and thats why hes all.. defensive or w/e. Once again, I love your story! and hope for more soon ^^
person whiterage
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
<< I tried to review but not sure if it went through! But just in case! I love this story! In this chappie, I loved how Harry reacted when Draco touched him =\ I think you know the exact words to use to make me feel so sympathetic towards Harry and I loved how even though Ron/Herm aren't able to support him that they still try. More soon please ^^~
person lietothedevil
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wah so many updates while i've been away. very good and down right interesting. will draco break through?