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May 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The banter was hilarious!!!! But I think it would have been funnier if Ron found Harry 'on his back writhing' as he had predicted. Seeing Harry dominating Draco would have made Ron laugh, not bang his head.
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, that was too damn hilarious!
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm having trouble figuring out what to say, simply because I'm giggling too much.
That was hilarious. Sorry, but awkward innuendoes are my genre of comedy, and you just about nailed my type of story right here.
Very good.
Also, I've been reading your other Harry Potter stories. I've read three, and I've liked the all so far. My favorite as of yet is Grey, and I think it could be an amazing piece of work if you continue in the writing style you've used thus far.
Thank you for the good read!
Identity99
That was hilarious. Sorry, but awkward innuendoes are my genre of comedy, and you just about nailed my type of story right here.
Very good.
Also, I've been reading your other Harry Potter stories. I've read three, and I've liked the all so far. My favorite as of yet is Grey, and I think it could be an amazing piece of work if you continue in the writing style you've used thus far.
Thank you for the good read!
Identity99
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! I loved how everyone kept laughing a Ron's naive comments. :) I must admit that I cringed when Malfoy said broomstick, but when Ron busted in talk about Harry's "firebolt" I busted out laughing. Actually, I'm still doing that... lol Wonderful job.
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I laughed...so very hard. Good thing I live alone, otherwise everyone that was living with me would wonder if I finally broke. ^^;; Not that I wasn't insane in the first place. Thanks so much for that, I needed that to cheer me up. I haven't laughed so hard in sooo long. -is still laughing- ~Kairen
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMgosh, poor unwitting Ron ... not the firebolt! Funny!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... it was funny. It was bloody hilarious! I'm sorry but the thought of Ron walking in on THAT just KILLS me! I love the dirty comments and innuendos about the broomstick and the snitch and everything!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! :) All of the innuendo was great! :) "You're about two months to late!" lol I love it :) This and two others made this whole thing worth it. At least what I have read anyway, lol
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was tooo funny! The whole house seemed to know!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was funny, actually. Makes me glad I stumbled headlong back into Fandom.