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by MisstressNicole

person 2Prettie
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lucky me was one of the first to have read this story. Well more of, it was read to me but none the less I was able to experience it first. For that reason I feel inclined to be honest with my opinion of it. It was rather meek and paled in comparison to my Dani's story rejecting the final book but good none the less. I rather enjoyed that you made Hermoine out to be terribley upset that her love, Snape, had been murdered in a mere novel. I really found that quite pleasing. I loved also how Draco found it funny to russel(having a spelling block) her feathers. One m,inor thing that needs to be fixed about this story is the fact that you should really consider having someone beta it. I know you probably had people read it but I think your incompetent friends (LMAO) missed something that I noticed as soon as I opened it. People is spelled with the 'L' always. It is not optional. Fix that nad probably a few more errors and it will almost as good as my brillance could have done.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This story is spectacular. :D I LOL'D lots. XD

Thanks for responding to my challenge; you chose some really good quotes, and I can't wait to see them in a story! If this one is any indication, it's gonna be really freaking good.

~Cat
person Shinigami24
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*amused* While I love Lady Diablo's idea-NO thanks, I don't want livid parents chasing after me for corrupting their kids...I would try printing the leaflets out on LJ...That is if you has a lifejournal somewhere...
person cdraco
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I needed this, it was like a healing balm to my heart after all that needless death and crazy talk about Harry x Ginny

I need me some more Harry x Draco fanfiction..off I go

Great, btw
person Danine
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh so fun!!!
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that is way tooo funny!