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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person kmplease
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, love it!! whats going to happen next???
update soon please!!
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My dear,

Two hot lemony scenes in two chapters. Brava. Brava. I am most pleased. I have added another chapter to custody battle and am working at the kinks so to speak. I was impressed with Severus' willingness to take in the child as his own. Very impressive. I find that I like this side of him. I can only imagine what that twat lavender will say when hermione turns up pregnant, I mean that's bound to happen, though she'd older, Josiah's young, and could use another sibling around his age. Heh. I wonder how Rose and Hugo will take to this man, Severus, heh and will he remain hidden? Or shall they perhaps have a go at restoring a proper identity to him? Though they should stay in italy for certain. Brava, my congratulations on another two chapters well done. Can't wait to read more.

~CC
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story just keep's on getting better and better. Thank you for all the updates.
person pickles87
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent story
waiting for more.
person lala_land
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok ok ok One word UPDATE
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't we all love a wake-up like that!! With Siw, of course. Only, while they're in the shower, they should have been writhing in pleasure, not 'writing' in pleasure;) Smut writers in the shower!
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Please keep up the good work and the frequent updates!
schedule August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.