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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

person rox487
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please please please please please please please update soon love it cant wait to read more please please update soon
person Caitlin
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH MYY GOODNESSSS

that was great....i have been keeping up with your fic, and think its amazing, but this chapter def. took the cake. Wow I never expected that to happen in the end. Cant wait for the next chapter...hope you post it soon!! This is def. my favorite fic now.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoooaaa.. what in the world?

Cannot wait to read more.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much. I needed this story so bad after today. I cant wait until she picks up the baby, or when the kids come to visit. Just take your time.
schedule August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, fuck, love, it was terrible. You've got them acting randy as rabbits. Tis to be expected I suppose. ~snort~ Though I can imagine that after the strawberries and oysters (and no, I don't care how sexy Severus is, you cannot turn down that sort of meal) They'll be going at it for several hours longer. I do so like the "You look sexy in my pajamas" bit. :p You've got them all keyed up and happy. Too bad they didn't find out that Lavender's baby is actually an alien who's going to eat her from the inside out. And yes, meeting the "family" so to speak, that's going to be interesting. Trust me, I know all about how "interesting" family meetings can get. And so you know, I've worked my kiester (is that spelled right?) off all day to get the next chapter ready, I should have it posted in the next few hours or so. Fantastic, keep it up.

~CC
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw yay! I'm happy that Molly is happy for her. K eep up the good work!
person Ele
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
?????

Enjoyable? -Nothing happened!
And Mrs. Weasley accepting that Hermione has a new lover already after just having officially found out about her husband's affair a few days ago? -Strange. As was the rushed sex in the previous chapter...

(Sorry, but that's my impression)
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just to clarify...It's been more like a few months since Molly found out about Ron......I didn't want my story to become a PWP so yes, the sex is in the background, a lot of it is implied....I don't spend my writing time trying to write out long detailed sex scenes, because I want my stories to be more about the plot, and when I spend most of my days chasing around a toddler I just don't have that kind of time. Not everyone can spend three chapters writing one lemon. I'm sorry if my story is a disappointment in that respect, but I will never write PWP...because I am just not that great with the lemons....it's really not my strong suit. I'm better at weaving the tale. I may try to edit some chapters to make the passage of time more clear, but my lemons and lack of are staying as they are. It never hurt anyone to leave some things to the imagination, which is something I like to do.
person lala_land
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update?? your chapters are so little!!
person lala_land
schedule August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update?? your chapters are so little!!