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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
acne and weight gain, at least hermione isn't dealing with her ex and his perfect maternity-model-like new wife. it's always nice to feel like karma is giving people what they deserve. i love this fic. so much fun to read each chapter.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Won is wong 'er wrong. Josie isn't feminine... one of my favorite movies is 'The Outlaw Josey Wales' and Clint Eastwood isn't fem! It's all in the spelling.
Do you suppose now that there is a 2 year old calling Ron 'Won', that Lav will notice how juvenile she sounds?
I almost felt bad for Ron, losing paternity of Josiah like that, but he did cheat, he was stupid and he basically drove Hermione out and away. Since we already know that Severus has less than sparkling morals, we're not even going to think twice about him picking up an inebriated woman at a bar and sleeping with her...
Do you suppose now that there is a 2 year old calling Ron 'Won', that Lav will notice how juvenile she sounds?
I almost felt bad for Ron, losing paternity of Josiah like that, but he did cheat, he was stupid and he basically drove Hermione out and away. Since we already know that Severus has less than sparkling morals, we're not even going to think twice about him picking up an inebriated woman at a bar and sleeping with her...
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you how much I've been enjoying this story. Oh, happy early birthday as well.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hermione only hit on the major points in explaining... mightn't the kids have other questions later? The way she told it, she had too much to drink and the nice man just called her a cab. There was nothing about a roll in the hay in between the drinks and the cab. Assumed, naturally, but skipped over.
Whoever Lavender thinks she's fooling with the glamor and the white gown ... there's still a baby going to be born 3 months after the wedding. Stupid girl.
Whoever Lavender thinks she's fooling with the glamor and the white gown ... there's still a baby going to be born 3 months after the wedding. Stupid girl.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like this twist of events cant wait to see whats going to happen!....
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've rather enjoyed this fic, I've been reading since chapter 18, but only recently aquired an account, so I thought it's due time that I review, isn't it?
I like the idea of Severus owning a winery. That's... brilliant. The plot twist of making Josiah's paternity results Severus and Hermione was absolutely brilliant. I really dislike Ron, I hope he dies painfully, or Lavender's baby ends up deformed or something. But more than all that, I hope Josiah starts talking like a two-and-a-half year old. (Because he is approximately 2.5, right?) I've had a little sister, and they don't talk like that, most of the time. 'sowwy' has to be the biggest offender, because my little sister could say 'can I have my bottle' and it would only sound a little bit slurred.
In other circumstances, I'm really enjoying your story and I hope you don't end here. May the show go on!
I like the idea of Severus owning a winery. That's... brilliant. The plot twist of making Josiah's paternity results Severus and Hermione was absolutely brilliant. I really dislike Ron, I hope he dies painfully, or Lavender's baby ends up deformed or something. But more than all that, I hope Josiah starts talking like a two-and-a-half year old. (Because he is approximately 2.5, right?) I've had a little sister, and they don't talk like that, most of the time. 'sowwy' has to be the biggest offender, because my little sister could say 'can I have my bottle' and it would only sound a little bit slurred.
In other circumstances, I'm really enjoying your story and I hope you don't end here. May the show go on!
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dearest,
You're forcing me to procrastinate. I should be on my way out the door to class. But nevertheless. It was a lovely chapter. I feel as though I don't know that you'd be able to get that over on a two year old, and him take it so acceptingly? I don't know, but I find that in my works as well I have a hard time characterizing what situations would be accpetable for the young children. It was brilliant, Ron trying to come to terms and what not, that bit I really liked. And it was touching that Joe still wants to love Ron...kudos for a speedy update, I can't say, however, that mine has had a speedy update. I've been busy with heaps of other stories, though I'll try to get you two chapters this weekend. I promise. Thanks for being a good writer and not taking my criticisms too harshly!
~CC
You're forcing me to procrastinate. I should be on my way out the door to class. But nevertheless. It was a lovely chapter. I feel as though I don't know that you'd be able to get that over on a two year old, and him take it so acceptingly? I don't know, but I find that in my works as well I have a hard time characterizing what situations would be accpetable for the young children. It was brilliant, Ron trying to come to terms and what not, that bit I really liked. And it was touching that Joe still wants to love Ron...kudos for a speedy update, I can't say, however, that mine has had a speedy update. I've been busy with heaps of other stories, though I'll try to get you two chapters this weekend. I promise. Thanks for being a good writer and not taking my criticisms too harshly!
~CC
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats what ron gets, love this chapter,please update soon!!
so next chapter are hermione going to talk to rose and hugo??
so next chapter are hermione going to talk to rose and hugo??
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You absolutely rock! Please please please continue! >.> I love this story it is one of the few reasons I bother even coming to this site anymore. So please keep up the good work!