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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww but he doesnt know that shes known for three years already, that wouldve been more interesting ^.^
person Anon
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad! Poor Hermione.

Love the fic so far. Can't wait to read more.
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome story so far. I love how you've kept him alive. I can't wait to read more. Update again and soon!

Tiffany
schedule July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 5-6 I find the end of your chapters come up too quickly! Regardless of her marriage falling apart [she never should have married a 'friend'!] a girl still needs someone to talk to. Just some one to tell all her woes to and lighten her mental load ... poor Silvano!
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so Severus is dying his hair, is he now? I still prefer him pale and greasy, though.

It sounds delightful, living in some villa by the mediterranean, sipping cognac and basking in the sun.

The thought of Snape reading Nancy Drew is quite titillating. Why in God's name would he read those?

Poor Hermione. She really deserves so much better than that wanker, Ron. Hopefully, her and "Silvano" hit it off.

You really are the fastest updater I know. But can you be quicker? lol ;)
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another chapeter? Gods woman (I'm assuming you're a woman) you're amazing!

Snape blushing? Hahahahahaha. That's priceless.

Keep 'em coming, please!
person dryade
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Exactly how I'd imagine a Weasley-Granger marriage. Do let her break out! And update soon.
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far! Ron, a drunken, cheating
git of a husband? Doesn't sound like too much of
a stretch to me. I hope that Severus will show
up to sweep our favorite little know-it-all off
her feet.
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm trying to picture 'Silvano' with short brown hair... not happening. The lure of the cure! If he had thought about it longer he would have realized that he can't maintain his distance and anonymity while attempting to collaborate on something like lycanthropy. He's going to want to get his hands into the middle of it ... and then there is Hermione's curiosity!

Loved the peenuf buwwer.
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... Silvano Scolari. Sounds a lot like Severus Snape. Coincidence? I think not. Then again, our favorite potions master doesn't have short brown hair or tan skin. Maybe a clever ruse or red herring to throw us off? This is very well written, and I continue to enjoy it. I'm thankful for the fact that you update so quickly.