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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

person Anon
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful update! Keep up the good work.
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you got the arguments and confusion written well enough, but need more emotion. Good chapter but given the subject matter of breaking divorce news to teens, Mom moving and removing youngest sibling, and the sudden announcement that Lav is going to have a baby - adding a new half sibling by The Other Woman... hurt piled on hurt ... needs a bit more!
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow poor mione she is loseing every thing and still noone see how much is it hurtting hurt i hope her kids come around and see how much ron's cheating has hurt her and see that it is for the best .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So sad. :( I can't wait to read more. This is a great story.
person Ele
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm. *Sceptical*

Ehm: thank you for updating that fast first :).

But "Love"? Affection maybe but love? We are talking about Severus, right? The Severus that I believe to know would at least want to know who he is inviting before he does so... *curious*
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great, go on fast!
person scully_m_
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! I can't wait for them to meet... ron is such a fuckwit! Sigh... the hate mail is pathetic... stupid wizarding world! Wankers. All of them!

I love how this story is progressing. I can not wait for the next chapter!
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is at least the second if not third or higher number review I've left you. It keeps getting better and better. Finally! Our Hermione will get to be with Silvano. :)
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad she didn't take him back! who cares what everyone else says! this is a great story, update soon!