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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. The concept is incredibly interesting. I hope you add a bit more to the chapters, though *crosses fingers and crosses heart and hopes not to get bit in the neck by a huge snake*

rofl.

schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person Anon
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh I hate Lavendar.

Can't wait to read more!
person Lulu
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so intrigued to see what will happen when they finally meet! Please let there be lots of snark!
person hpbcn
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm just a comment, i think you forgot that severus already guessed who nancy was a bit back. When she found out about ron, she let slip his name and lavender's while talking on the radio... i thought he made the connection back then. Aside from that, still good. Really want to see their reactions when they finally see each other, bet severus is to die for!

hpbcn
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man, you are so awful leaving it there!! oh please update soon! i love this story. stupid ron bringing lavender over after he said hermoine could be over early...what a jerk!! update soon!
person Jasmine
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! It really is different then most that I've read and original too. I can tell you how much I ethusiastically await your next chapter. I hope you update soon!
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. ron should not have let her come over knowing that mione was coming back in the morning... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The anticipation of getting to Silvano's is killing me!!!!
person Ele
schedule August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, does that refer to my review? Thank you!

I indeed had understood that they have had deep conversations. And they explain a certain deeper liking. I say it might even go as far as falling in love because of them, but... I still (personally) do not believe Severus would admit to himself to have such feelings as long as he does not know the identity (name, past) of the person in question.

Yet that does not prevent me from liking your story very much and looking forward to the next update ^^!