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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. Ron was quite the fool (as usual) for having Lavender at the house at this time, and she was even the bigger fool to be there. I can see that she wants to state her teritory, but you shouldn't have to many braincells to know that if you wanted any respect or positive interaction with your future housebands children, you don't disrespect their mother and you tread carefully. Lavender can never take Hermiones place with her children and the sooner Lavender realise that, there migth be a chance she wont find spiders wandering over her food when the children is around:-)) I look forward for Hermione and Severus first meeting so update soon!!!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurry up and get her to silvano!! lol i'm so glad her kids put that cow in her place!! lol ^_^ update soon PLEASE!!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See now you're just torturing us. I felt like that chapter, while very entertaining, could have been left out? Like a deleted scene in a movie? I mean, don't get me wrong, I loved it, and while it does tell key components to the story, we're all just waiting for you to get Hermione's arse with Josiah (lovely name btw) to Silvano's!!! I mean, the anticipation is killing me! Will she recognize him? Will her recognize her? Certainly at least the latter if not the former as well. You play your characters well, though I do hope that Josiah makes such a fuss when going to visit Ron & Lavender that Ron just says to hell with it and he can stay with Hermione. Divorce isn't always neat and clean and Hermione could totally win out if she had to take Josiah from Ron, and honestly? Ron was cheating on Hermione before Josiah was born, and he didn't seem much like he cared about the baby when she first told him she was pregnant, so would it really be that bad for Hermione to get a little justice and get her son? I mean, Ron is about to have his own...whatever with the cow. A baby calf I guess. :p Please update sooon! I miss your multi chapter updates, like two or four at a time, but I know when that happens it's usually a while in-between said multi chapter updates. Please! For the love of Severus! Get us to Silvano's villa in Tuscanny, and I suppose I had better make myself quite clear as you seem to be the cheeky type of author who would spend the entire next chapter getting us ready and then at the very end "getting to arriving" at the villa, so please, for the love of Severus! Get us to the villa with some moving in and some interacting between Silvano and Hermione. :) Thank you. Fantastic story.
person XXXXX
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Simply amazing...i like the way you intergrated the characters from the series...High Five
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's quite good!
I have a story I've been "co-writing" with a friend that has Sev healed by Fawkes too XD I dont plan to put it up though as I feel I'm a terrible writer.

Anyways, this is just excellent. Please update soon! I'm hooked! Can't wait to see the reaction when they meet. XD
person Marti
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can completely empathsize(spelling?) with Hermione. After ten years of marriage and three kids, my now ex and I seperated...before I knew it, he had a fiancee and was introducing her to the family and my children. So, you've done a wonderful job with this. and I want more Severus/Hermione action!!!! LOL

schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.
person LVanna
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're quite welcome, hon, and thanks for the credit. I told ya this story would be good! :)

Go get her, Molly... give the tart what for!
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please udpate soon.
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mwhahaa! Great chapter!