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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story so much I hope you stay with it. Your idea is so new it's what we need righ now please try to finish the story.
person Emily
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay so i've been reading this for several days and all i have to say is... UPDATE!!! <33
person Ele
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Then he could work on falling out of love with her, and fast.' LOL Told you... ^^

I like this Molly. Most people make her look like an old bat but this one is cool.
person onewing
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The moment of truth arrives! I like the cliffhangar, but not fair to leave it like that. I'm glad someone decided to keep this pairing going.
Great job!
person Anon
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nonono falling out of love mister.

This is great! Love it.
person annie
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww i'm a little sad that in the breakfast chapter you made lavender not so slutty....it would be great if the baby wasn't rons!! oh man that would be great....sorry i just hate lavender sooo much! haha well keep it up!! i can't wait to see how the rest of the story goes!!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods, I read those last few paragraphs like ten times!
This is so excellent! i demand more!
I giggled at the reactions a bit and I want to know if Hermione recognizes him!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~Lol~ that was great i love what rose did to lavender .. and now he know who she is how love will it take her to find out who he really is ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

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person Cami
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I can't wait to see this next blowout between Hermione and Lavender. Or for when Hermione and Severus come face to face! Please Update Again Soon!
person kmplease
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Drama, in the weasley house!! omg tears, i cried for the half the story, it is a really good story, please update soon!! i hate waiting!!