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for The Wrong Time

by snapescauldron

person kmplease
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was so great!!
never liked lavander to begin with, so yea,
please snape fall out of love with hermione, not a chance!!
please update soon!!
ps: loved that the children sided with hermione,
keep up the good work
person sharkdiver
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Come ON!!!! You can't leave a cliffie like that!!!!!! I cab't wait for the next chapter...this is a really good fic! Oh, and you make me want to bitch-slap Lavender...she's a dirt bag!

~Sharkdiver
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yes! another chapter (or three) and grand was it indeedy :D I cant wait for another installment! Please hurry :D
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CLIFFIE!! update soon! i love this story!
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God'' women your killing me, I love this story please update soon again and again give me more, NOW PLEASEE'' HEHE,
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the update!
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. im glad she told him her real name .. please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person Anon
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nono falling out of love silly Severus.

Keep up the good work! :)
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear lords that was intense! I do feel so awestruck by the fact that just- just- wow. Yay for Silvano! And dear gods he cannot let himself fall out of love. My question is, are they going to have a little 'fun' or something more serious, either way you look at it, before she figures out who he is? (I don't want to say it here, just in case Hermione sneaks out of the story and reads my review. hehe) But I mean, could that make him realize? If she perhaps...kisses him, or maybe something a little more. Thank you so very much for updating those two wonderful chapters, I can hardly wait for more. I love they way you've played Lavender out, she's a fantastic character that we love to hate. :) You've got Molly right on cue as well. I do apologize for not updating on anything at the moment, it's not that I'm not trying but technological updates have set me back. My laptop is broken atm so I've been bouncing around from friend's notebook to computer lab to internet cafe (I'm in a foreign country at the moment) finding it difficult to get things accomplished that way. For Custody Battle I cannot update until the laptop is fixed (supposedly tomorrow) because the next chapter is all but three lines finished and saved on said laptop. I'm working on To Save A Serpent as we speak. I do appreciate the loyalty, and I graciously appreciate the amazing story you've got going here. I cannot wait to read more and I do hope that they get to have a bit of fun soon, either with her knowing him or not, it doesn't matter, she deserves a break. A fancy dinner, a back rub, and a good shag sort of break. ~wink~ Keep up the fantastic story!

~CC
person neko33
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally!!! Yay!! Hurry and write more! what happens when hermoine finds out? update soon!