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Dearest Love,

You're killing me! -dies theatrically and dramatically- One tiny, sweet little kiss! Ack! -dies again- And he wasn't supposed to be falling for her! He told himself he wouldn't! But hey, who am I to complain? At least there's some romantic action going on. Yay. I'm sure he's a fantastic cook, by the way. Your attention to detail throughout this story is fascinating. And I just love how readily Josiah, which is still a gorgeous name, takes to "Siw" it's adorable. And I could totally see that tickle scene, just played out so beautifully, tickling the son, then the mother, and Hermione just being all flushed and beside herself on the floor. And that adorable little kiss! Ah! -faints- So wonderful. -drools in anticipation for the next chapter- Normally, I'm far more articulate, but you've got that raw need rolling, now, dear. I hope the next chapter is filled with awkward fumbling kisses and touching, and lots of blushing and dialogue, I love it when dialogue can be well played into a scene like that. And well, so what if he's dead? If he's dead, he's dead. It did occur to me that perhaps, and just perhaps, he could have a happy, blissful life with Silvano Scolari, as he is. Perhaps Severus Snape really is dead, and although Hermione may or may not discover that he has reinvented his life as Silvano, couldn't their lives as lovers and a family exist as they are? It seems to be perfect so far. But you do as you wish, I can't wait! And by the way, I updated custody battle, just for you! :)

~CC

I like it. Please update soon.

aww that was great i love it and i love how josiah as taken to sil .. please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

great progress. keep going! i think this is my favorite fic right now..

*Waiting eagerly to see how this goes on*

o you're awful! still just leaving it off! update soon!

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for the update.

That was so good. Tis story just keep's on getting better and better.

Oh you scandelous tease! It was all so fast and all so- wow! You just had to make that amazing crushing kiss of his appear. I mean, the wine hit her a little fast, but dear god, I mean, he's fallen in love with her. After all he's been through you'll deny him her, even now? That would be a shame indeed. Do keep up the good work! I'm loving it! Two updates in one day, I'm thoroughly impressed. I may have another update on mine before today is out (in Aussie so I've got a longer day to work with ~wink~) But you are quite the writer. Wine & mint? What a lovely combinaion for a kiss. Oooh, let's hope she chases him to the bedroom? Or maybe he'll seek her out in her bedroom? I mean Josiah is smitten with him. Surely she could love what her baby loves? Oh, wait, she already does. ;p

~CC

WHOA WHOA WHOA. Talk about an evil cliffhanger. Please update again soon!