rate_review Reviews

Harry went from lust and hope to just walking away. Draco goes from loving to raging rape. Now Harry is needy and desperate. Talk about unusual.

I didn't find it too confusing. There were a couple parts that I had to stop and think about though lol. For some reason, I loved the part where Draco was dancing around his room. I could picture that perfectly lol. Great job!

Draco as a little psycho stalker, interesting. Also I'm not fond of rape scenes, it was acceptable. And I don't think it's confusing, just that Harry gave in so easy that was a bit confusing if not implausible. I mean, he was raped after all. But of course, if he wasn't directly raped (if you know what i mean) but only 'played' it, it's more plausible.
I ramble, don't i?

This is a surprisingly good story. The only problem is you need a beta. It's not confusing as far as the story goes as it is confusing in grammar. "You don't do nothing" "I don't know what homework I got," "go to sleep to our own dorms." Nothing big but still they catch the eye. I did like the story and this isn't a flame, it's just a little friendly help. Thank you for writing this and I look forward to reading the next installment if there is to be one.

~~Avid Harry/Draco Shipper -Nicole