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for Always Loving You

by Daktalakpak

schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter...as always...Hope you update asap...Short chapters drive me crazy! Still like the story though.
person Sheree
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think that in the end they can be happy but they need to face the fact that Harry betrayed Draco by believing the fake aurors and letting them take him away. Harry should have at least listened to Draco's story before letting him be "arrested". Why doesn't Draco feel any resentment over it? It seems unrealistic that he doesn't blame Harry for some of it. Hannah and Draco have gone through hell over the past few years and maybe them living with him was rushing it. Where would Draco and Hannah go? What would they do for money? Right now they are relying on Harry but if they move out they would need to rely on Draco and he needs help to accept and cope with what happened to him and Hannah. Also Hannah needs help dealing with the hell Voldemort put her through as well. Maybe they need to find a psychiatrist or psychologist.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Draco be back in a couple of hours are will he run? Sooo need chapter 11!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good! Maybe that'll be his last drink! I sooo need chapter 10! What does Draco do now?
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I want to see what happens. I hope Harry doesn't betray Draco. It's evident they still love each other. However, everything is fine one second and horrible the next between them. I do love your story but I do think the chapters need to be a bit longer.
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thoought it was wonderful especially when he said who wants to go get icecream!
person Jan
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I could understand why Draco would start drinking, but to do so again after that rapist bastard Voldefuck is dead? Not only that but to also find out that while he was under that little bliss that alcohol gives you, his only daughter was being rape by said bastard? How could he? He should now that he won't be able to protect her in his condition, fuck the fact that Harry is there. He should know better as the "mother".


Keep up your great writing, please update soon again. I am looking forward to chapter 9. ^_~
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought they were working things out? Going to start over? Draco is drinking again? Sooo need chapter 9!
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into a really interesting story. I just wish I could write so that I would have someone to leave me some witty comments. (Incert witty comment here). Sorry couldn't think of anything really good to say. Keep up the great work.
Kat
person Jan
schedule July 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love that they are getting reacquainted with one another but couldn't they do it after they had already made hot and steaming sex? Anyway I can't wait for chapter 8 to be updated, so please do so soon. I love your story.