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for Hopeless Love

by Mistaken

person Kawaai Neko
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting plot twist, im intreagd to reed more.
~Kawaai Neko~
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It has merit.
I'd love to read more.
I just think you've written Harry a bit wimpy. I mean, he fainted?!?!
person Mistaken
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, I am soo sorry!!! I didn't even realize that I had a spoiler in my summary!!! I know you are all probably royally pissed but I am reallllly sorry!
Sorry!
person Janie
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's a very good start and I hope you continue.
person jam-jam
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good story, only thing, if you want to avoid spoilers, you may want to change your description on the main page... you kind of spoiled it for those who don't know Snape dies.
person tippi
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Don