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now that i think about it you're right. he left two HORMONAL teenagers in a tent for weeks. one of which is his GIRLFRIEND and the other is his BEST FRIEND who he just ABANDONDED and he didnn't think this would happen. i would love to see a scene where ron returns just as they''re kissing.

Wouldn't expect anything else. Hot and sexy!

I really liked this story, I hope you continue it! It was my only problem throughout the HP books that sex was never even hinted at which seemed really unrealistic in a boarding school of mixed sex teenagers where the girls could get into the boys dorms even if not the other way around. Loads of different ages read HP so I understand JK couldn't actually talk about sex, but I thought it could at least have been hinted at, younger readers wouldn't have picked up on it.
I thought this was a great missing scene to DH, something that most likely would have happened in reality. Good job!

Fact: Two very healthy teenagers left alone for weeks(even a long weekend) on end WILL wind up together, especially if they have love and respect for each other :)
Great story!

I remember being a teenager .. hell I've had boysfriend who could have sex 5 times a day and they were in there 20s..
they say in war people become closer for love and support and thinking they may die at any time and the sex is better too... or something like that.

That was hot! Loved it! You're right, some people need to get a clue. If anybody here doesn't like to see HP characters featured in sexual stories, then they shouldn't be here to begin with. Bloody hypcrites! Anyway, awesome story!

I am one, but I don't see myself having sex for the hell of it. Though Harry and Hermione are dif story. Enjoyed it. Hope to see more.

That is one of the best one shots i've read on this story, belivable, just enough plot and very well written. Very well done.

This was a great story and damn right what you said this is what really would have happened between Hermione and Harry during the course of DH and jumping from camp to camp around like that during practically the whole novel. Please make more of these kinds of stories between Harry and Hermione. Thanks for the story hope to read more soon!!!

Nice fic! Thank you, thank you for stating one of my problem with that part of the book, which coincides with Harry picturing a girl in a wedding dress. It's just not realistic!