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for A New Beginning (DH -COMPLIANT)

by Ms_Figg

person Domenica
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've finally gotten better at consistant reviewing! Yay! I like this transitional chapter, I see where you're going with it and I like it *g* It will be nice to have Hermoine only a mile away, right? I wonder what could happen? *eg*

~Domenica
person Ms_Figg
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Linda: You were absolutely right. I originally had the three children and someone wrote me and said I forgot Victorie and I just...added her. I was pretty fried at the end...remembering her would-be boyfriend ate at the house four times a week and didn't look it up...just added it. I opened up DH and checked, then fixed it back. Thank you so much for pointing it out for me. *** I might need more help before this is over. lol
person DB1
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@2. im glad someone started a story post Harry Potter and the deathly hallows! awesome story so far. i was so dissapointed when JK killed snape off so im glad you can bring him back to life!!! update soon

*DB*
person Ele
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, in the story I'm working on he carried an antidote... but a bezoar is even better...
You are aware that he is in his late fifties in your story at the moment? ;)
person Raug397
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Always have been a big fan of your stories and was thrilled to see that you had started one like this. Definitely looking forward to reading more chapters! I am hoping updates will be prolific!

Again, really love your work. A deep thanks from me for beginning a story like this for all of us who love our Potions Master and didn't want Deathly Hallows to be the end of him. Thank you, Ms_Figg!!
person Ms_Figg
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ele: Yes I am aware, but I always keep in mind that wizards and witches can live up to 200 years, so fifty is only a quarter of their lives and their aging is slower. Middle age sets in about 80 or 90, their condition dependent on how well they take care of themselves. So in his fifties, Snape can still be quite sexy and vibrant in a snarky kind of way. lol. I have a sneaking suspicion he will be. ;)
person Prospera
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and I'm so glad you're writing it...but I also have to say that with your wonderful imagination, you are the perfect person to notice the fact that the Epilogue doesn't actually SAY that Ron and Hermione got married. It implies it, and it's pretty explicit that Rose and Hugo are Ron's children, but there's only implication there that they are Hermione's too...
person Ryu
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, you've killed off Ron like I've always wanted to do :P. It's good to see that you're still writing SS/HG FF and havn't gone over to the dark side( aka HermionexRon). I'm wondering how ur going to deal with the Lily thing though...I can't believe she never noticed that he had feelings for her. And shes supposed to have brains? Plus she couldn't have been all to ambitious if she got knocked up at 20...
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! OMG! I love it so far! I was wondering how you would play around the facts revealed in Deathly Hollows! Keep it up! I can't wait to read more! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your ending to DH is a million times better than JKR's. How dare she kill off my snape! You are far more talented than JK is. Please keep writing!:D