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by Ms_Figg

person Ele
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"outside of the occasional whore"? Ehem.

Apart from that: a very amusing chapter (well, that was amusing, too). Thanks for updating!
person Ms_Figg
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ele: lol. Just calling it how it is. ;)
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Excellent chapter!! I love this story so far! Though, I do hope Hermione figures out Snape is alive soon. :)
person Ele
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
By breaking the wards isn't Rose breaking wizard law as well? That's underage-magic, right?
person Ms_Figg
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it's underage magic, but it's hard to identify exactly who is performing it in magical areas. Harry got in trouble so much because he lived in a muggle area. More than likely, and this is conjecture, the magical signature was ignored or might not even registered since there is so much protection around Sparse Venues as well as magical activity due to Hermione's work. That's the best I can give you on that. In another story I had Mathias Granger (Hermione and Snape's son)get in trouble for performing magic in Hermione's house setting the table at Christmas and was informed by several readers that usually nothing was done when it occurred in magical households or areas because it was hard to identify who performed the spell. So I had him targeted after the fact because of the DKV views that were being taken up. So Rose and Hugo were fine, though they had no business doing what they were doing in the first place.
person Line
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very nice.. I was at the end of my seat.. MORE!
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess Severus knows that the day when Hermione put two and two together would come, I look forward to see their first meeting!
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i'm so glad snape wasn't left to the snake what a horrible way to die. I especially like the pink bubblegum and the medi-box LOL it's too much fun!
person Jenni
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying the plot of this story. I've never seen Hermione in canon, though, quite so single-minded, she's always seemed to fit things in. She's certainly never been unclean apart from some quill-ink on her face -- and that's not unheard of with ink of any variety. She just seems so OTT in this fic. Well, apart from that, I like the premise. I was just wondering, how could molly say she'dbe neglecting them when they're at school all term?? that was funny of her.
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.