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Breastlady: You just keep going girl. Actually, I thought Hermione was being pushy too. She didn't ask him, she just stated she was going to tell Harry because he had "a right to know" I don't agree with everything I have the characters do, but just like in life, people are going to do what they want. Plus it keeps it interesting. My kids crack up watching me write, because I'll be frowning at something someone is doing in the story, or muttering under my breath. lol. I guess it entertains them. I really do appreciate your comments though. Keep 'em coming. I'm paying attention. ***

ok, i asked nicely..now im demanding you stop this silly nonsense...you can not bring old snake face back into the picture...voldiemoldyshorts is not welcomed..unless you make him sorry for trying to gain acess into this story..hm, lets see,,you could make what is gonna happen to him funny,..we need funny things to happen to old moldybutt...but please continue to intice hermione and snape,,they are always a great pair..need more love action with those too..great story so far though..

i LOVE you you have even managed to bring back voldmort!!!...are you sure you arn't JKR secretly writting the book the way she wanted it to go???

lol Sarah. If only I was. :)

Ah, I see, well I'm 5'8 so I get to look down at the world,lol.It helps when your in a crowd too :).Have to say the resurection stone idea was quite brilliant ...although Rod reminds me a bit of Severus-when he was a kid. Theres even a pretty, smart red-head to add to the package...I'm guessing the obligatory competition for her love is also going to come along soon?

Very original and creative! I can even understand that Hermione was happy with Ron, and that's usally something I just can't buy. I never think it would work betweent them; but, you made that believable. It really is an enthralling story. I love you original setting, and your in depth character interactions. It's very well written. I hope you update soon!

Ryu: The only thing Rod and Severus have in common is that Rod is treated badly by other students. Severus was much better off. He did have friends (even if they were aspiring Death Eaters), he was great and quite talented in potions and with spells, he would fight back when targeted, spoke up for himself and he was enrolled in Hogwarts properly. Rod doesn't have any friends, isn't above average in anything, really barely passing, he doesn't fight back when targeted or isn't confrontational, and he has to work to make his way. I think it is the targeting that makes people think he and Severus are similiar, that and the appeal of Voldemort, except the reasoning was different. Severus wished to protect Lily and thought being a Death Eater would help him do that. All Rod wants is a bit of respect, though he wouldn't mind being popular and liked and to do better in school. Rose isn't a love interest at all. She just speaks to him. He's under no delusion she likes him, though he admires her flying ability and appreciates her being nice to him. So, in my mind, he's not anything like Severus was in school. But again, people see things differently.

you really make this story... 3 dimensional.
you know, you could just focus on ss/hg, since this is the main pairing the story should be about,
but instead to concentrate fully on how to get them together after they both lost their loves,
you create some background plot to make this, as I said, 3 dimensional.
this is no critique by all means :) I adore the fact that you make so much more out of this.

always reminds me of those nasty people who flame you and tell you your stories just
base on sexual interactions with a poor plot - well, they're proved wrong once again in my eyes ;)

OH NO YOU DONT!!!!!!!! DONT YOU DARE BRING THAT THING BACK INTO A HARRY POTTER STORY!!!!!!!!!YOU JUST CANT.....!!!!!!!!!!!..........ONLY IF YOU MAKE HIM GOOD!!!!!
DONT YOU DARE BRING HIM BACK....NOT A GOOD THING TO DO...YOU EVIL EVIL EVIL PERSON YOU.... ok now that thats out of my system, please write more and sonn...need more snape and hermione interaction...need to feel the love..lol

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Yes, I agree that this was an important chapter. At the end of DH I thought, "Hermione shouldn't have wasted her life that way". My fan fiction Hermione would be restless with that life. Until Ms Figg added in the fact that she was not just loved but she was utterly cherished. What would most of us give up to be cherished by a mate? I am blessed to say "I did and I am". And now I think it was worth it. Though, I did not always feel this way when I was young. I also work with many women who have reached their professional dreams only to find that after all that, they just wanted to be cherished and have babies. I've actually had very successful women say to me after spending literally $90.000. to get finally pregnant at thirty something years old, "I wasted my so much of my life. I should have done this first and then pursued my career. I just want to stay home and be a mom." But I must admit that though I am sorry for Hermione that she has lost her loving husband, she now has a chance to truly use her gifts and grow in this new way. Without you adding this chapter I had a vague sense that Hermione really had wasted her life thus far. Thank you. This chapter explained a lot. Breastlady